Mouna

Cute

It is the first time I read a novel in the 70s I would have loved if you invested more in the world building to really bring the atmosphere of that period of time. But the story is good and easy to read. I liked how you showed the MC's struggles to fit in. Good luck with your writing!

Unique

This is the first time I read a story that tackles this subject. The uniqueness of the topic and the way you wrote it made me keep reading. I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

The grammar and ponctuation also sentences' structure need a throughout editing. I know you are aware of that. I wanted to stress on this subject because it can make your reader put your book down and never look at it again. Your book deserves better and the message it delivers deserves to reach far.

Good job and good luck with your writing!

For any reader out there, give this book a chance. It will be worth your time.

Good

If you are looking for a laid back slow paced book with great chemistry between characters, this is the story for you!

The few typos and mistakes didn't steal much of the overall enjoyment of the story, but honestly changing POVs did.

An adventure book is supposed to be plot driven, but this book focuses on characters, giving you insights of their backstory which is not always necessary to the plot. Is it a good thing or a bad thing? It's for you to decide when you read the book.

intriguing

I really liked the prologue. Your writing style is captivating... keep writing!

unique protagonist

The story is very enjoyable to read. I really liked the main character. Also, the plot is different which is very refreshing. I was addicted to the story up to a certain point. I won't spoil it, but I just couldn't read further (just because it's not for me. There is nothing wrong with the story).
Up to where I read, the story was fun, gripping, immersive... the whole time, I had a smile on my face. Good job writer! I'm definitely looking forwards to read more from you!

good different

Very interesting story. Too bad it's not finished. There's tension, mystery, a roller coaster of emotions. Everything to keep you on the edge of your seat. Good job writer🌹

Recrudescence

Yes, I'm writing a review for my own book because I can.
I started writing this book while aware that it'll be a drop in a sea of great books. I wanted people who come across this book to read something different and hopefully enjoy it. Today, I'm grateful for every person who read, commented, voted, reviewed the story and/or added to their library. These notifications were the highlight of my day/night.
For any future reader out there, don't be a stranger. Join the family. Read and comment. I replay to everyone🌹

So far so good

From the two chapters I read, it looks like a sweet story. I hope there was more chapters so I could give a more detailed feedback. I like the idea of taking a break to gather yourself and recharge. Avoid switching tenses and try to show more and tell less so we can engage with your characters. Keep writing!

nice start

Nice first chapter. It was refreshing to see something different. I like the ow relatable your characters are. Good job and keep writing!

Beautiful

Good story. I really like the fact that the MC has her own agenda and is not just a human girl. Also, her journey of self discovery is intriguing. The clash between species adds to the story. Beautiful read.

I can't stop reading!

A gripping story. I like the fighting scenes, The pain and sadness I could feel in every chapter and the main character is so likable. The premise for your story is solid enough to make me overlook the grammar and punctuation or the occasional miswording. I know once you finish your book you will come back and fix them. Good job!

I recommend this book but with a warning: Don't read this book at your bedtime you'll not be able to put it down till you finish it.

engrossing read

I enjoyed reading this book. The dystopian world is well described. The writing style makes the reading experience very enjoyable. The characters are relatable and three-dimensional... I can keep going with the attributes of this book, however, I want to mention something that made me skip some paragraphs: Info dumps. I know you created a wonderful world and it was interesting learning about it, but sometimes it hinders the progress of the story. The book 'show don't tell' by Sandra Gerth listed nine red flags for telling, and how to turn telling into showing. Make sure to check it out if you decided to take my advice in consideration.

I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys dystopian stories or whoever wants to read a good werewolf story with a unique plot.

good story!

A Story beautifully written. The MC is very interesting. I really sympathize with the love interest. The storyline started slow (which is not a bad thing) then increased in suspense. The only thing I didn't like is the payoff. It made me feel that the story didn't finish, you just decided to cut it there. Maybe it is your decision as a writer, but it is not satisfying at leat for me as a reader. Overall, it is a good story. I enjoyed reading it.

pleasant

I enjoyed reading this book. The world building, the dynamics between characters, the story line very fascinating.

There is few typos here and there, sometimes the punctuation is a little confusing, but I know you can fix that with a round of edit. Good job!

I love it

I really like the story. It's original and refreshing. I instantly connected with your characters and was eager to know more, but the info dumps in the first three chapters were a little bit frustrating. It made me want to skip some paragraphs.

Apart from that, the story is captivating and I highly recommend reading it.

I want to read more

I am surely interested in reading more. It is still the begining of the story, and I can see it going in a certain direction, but you promised a plot twist and I am waiting for it.