Mrs.Maia

"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." ~ Dr. Seuss

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Skeptical at first

When I first started reading this I was a bit hesitant, the characters grew on me though. I honestly was a little miffed about the female lead and how she was written plus with the way Mr. Thorn acted and treated her but I realized that was their relationship. You wrote the characters in such a way to not only show the type of dynamics that type of couple could have but made it real. You made me uncomfortable at times, made me laugh, and also made me INVEST my time in these characters. That's what good writers do.

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Needs work

I understand that English may not be your first language, but if you're going to write in English it's better if you can understand the mechanics of it. The character development is weak and the plot is very confusing. Anyone who says this is "good writing" probably hasn't read a good book in their life. You need to take a writing class and brush up on your grammar.

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