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Good plot

A few misspellings but otherwise great Few more details could have been added.

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With holding judgement

So far so good. I'm withholding my judgement just yet. So far I'm not seeing much of the connection to the new co-worker other than she thinks he is cute. I'm not feeling a *click*. Let's see just where this goes.

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Neutral

Some miss spellings. He and her, grammatical errors. Some things are unbelievable, like a guard that revered taking just her and him into a group of savages with no back up at all. I understand wanting to get to the thick of it but the lead up didn't have any intense feelings. Why would the guard just take her there? I mean he works for the king not her. I do love the story line however. I'm very interested where this goes.

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It's alot

Good story and there is a lot going on. I liked it

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I'm all in

Very seldom do I come across a book that can keep my interests. This has had me from the start!

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Captivating,thrilling, suspenseful

A great read! Perfect for Galtea

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I likey

Some words/ spelling errors. Quick to get into the punch of the story, could use more details in a few areas. Like the layout of the restaurants. But I'm like you I love to get to the juice of the story. I think maybe pace yourself a little more. The tempo is in the details. With that being said I love the fact it is not all details. Enough I can think of the surroundings myself. I do not like details that leave no imagination but I hate when I already have a character in my mind and learn ¾ through the book they are nothing like my imagination. Overall though I followed the story without much guessing. It flowed semi-well. Just pace it a little better. I like your style and the way you can bring it home with terms all people understand. Good job.

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It's blah so far

Not the best seems rushed

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