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MrsWright
Good plot
A few misspellings but otherwise great Few more details could have been added.
Read the story nowWith holding judgement
So far so good. I'm withholding my judgement just yet. So far I'm not seeing much of the connection to the new co-worker other than she thinks he is cute. I'm not feeling a *click*. Let's see just where this goes.
Read the story nowI likey
Some words/ spelling errors. Quick to get into the punch of the story, could use more details in a few areas. Like the layout of the restaurants. But I'm like you I love to get to the juice of the story. I think maybe pace yourself a little more. The tempo is in the details. With that being said I love the fact it is not all details. Enough I can think of the surroundings myself. I do not like details that leave no imagination but I hate when I already have a character in my mind and learn ¾ through the book they are nothing like my imagination. Overall though I followed the story without much guessing. It flowed semi-well. Just pace it a little better. I like your style and the way you can bring it home with terms all people understand. Good job.
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