Michelle

Moultrie, Georgia

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Worth the read

While there are numerous grammar and spelling errors, this story is truly worth the read. The author has crafted an interesting story and well devolved characters. I would much rather read this story with the errors than a boring one with none.

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Rememberable

This is a great read. I find I am trying to get one step ahead in where the story is flowing. That is impressive to get me so invested. The story itself flows and tackles real events a couple in this position would face. The inner turmoil is expressed in a manner I can understand without it becoming rhetoric. All in all, this is a well-constructed story.

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A good read

This has been a great read. The story is thought out and not rushed. All to often I lose interest in rushed story telling, but this is a constant burn and worth the effort.

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Creature as an Endearment

"Just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in!" - Michael Corleone

I find this quote on my tongue in relation to the mate bond both of the main characters fight. I can honestly see one or the other breaking the fourth wall and saying it, which is quite a talent from this author. Bravo for pulling me back in to this story.

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