Nauti Bear

I am an island girl who is amateur scribbler: short stories and poems. I love reading as it fuels my imagination and helps me create new fantasy worlds.

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Creepy is the new sexy.

This isn't the type of book I would usually read and I have never heard about Creepypastas before... but I am GLAD to have been introduced to the culture in such a witty and well-developed story.

I found myself being very invested in the triangle developing between Zariah, Masky and Sonic.Exe.

Aside from some technical problems, aka the need for commas, periods and proper sentence construction; I saw the fantasy and creativity of the author's story coming to life in my own imagination. Well done!! and I can't wait to read book two.

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Uniquely different

I LOVE mythology stories, especially when a writer creates something so unique, new and imaginative about ancient myths.

Algea is such a badass and Seth helps with the comic relief. I love the chemistry between the two main characters and their interactions with other characters in the story; it was well written and creative. You also did an excellent job providing detailed descriptions of the different characters, battle scenes and various locations found throughout the ongoing story.

I can't wait to see what happens next.
Good Job and keep on writing.

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Very interesting

The style of writing and the overall portrayal of the story had me feeling like I was reading someone's diary... A well written, quite descriptive diary. The highs and lows, the emotional turmoil and the first-person narrative of the story had this reader in the driver seat of this story. I love stories that keep me on my toes, and this definitely did.

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Intriguing

It was an interesting read. You have a great eye for details. Especially, the way you described the scenery and interactions between characters, as well as the development of each character.
However, the length of some of your paragraphs made it difficult for me to concentrate as they were too long. I found myself re-reading the same line or in the need to increase the font size to try follow the story. Lastly, some of your sentences seemed to run on, so some additional editing will be needed.

Overall, it's not my usual type of story but I enjoyed it as you told a captivating story... so keep up the great work.

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Damn! (in all the right ways)

I stumbled on your profile by accident and what a happy accident it turned out to be... this is my first book from your library and all I can say is "Damn..." I thoroughly enjoy this gem of a story and can't wait to read more.

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Sweet Read.

While this isn't my usual genre for books, it was an interesting read. Keep on working on your story (edits wise) and great job.

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Voyeur alert.

Quite a story... Not a type of story I will usually read but I found myself wanting to know more with each passing chapter.
I felt also like a voyeur reading someone else's diary... even, the first-person narrative had me feeling the burglar's emotions... Quite naughty and mysterious.

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I want a Mr. Babysitter

Wow... I was originally introduced to this story on Chapters and immediately fell in love with the characters, reading about their growth and developments as well as the many twists and turns associated with the overall plot.
I can't wait for this book to be released on Amazon so I can have my own personal copy of Pia and Alex's love story.
I would be interested to know if we will be getting a story based on Jake and Alicia relationship?

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