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Liked what the author's vision was, just don't agree that it's a good poem, but as a speech , very painful !

I gave it this score because I realized what the author was going for and she did a good job in writing it out unfortunately, it has no rhyme scheme. It is a heartfelt and painful anecdote , it's like a good breakup song .Bonus points fo interesting use of Caps lock and great punctuation for emphasis. Really enjoyed the tempo. Short sentences' use were amazing for a fast paced poem , but an even effective speech.

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Liked what the author's vision was, just don't agree that it's a good poem, but as a speech , very inspiring !

I really liked the author's vision. It is uplifting and inspiring. But as a poem it has no rhyme scheme. That is the only problem in this. I gave it this score because I realized what the author was going for and she did a good job in writing it out . Bonus points fo interesting use of Caps lock and great punctuation for emphasis. Really enjoyed the uplifting message to stand strong and be yourself. Short sentences' use were amazing for a fast paced poem .

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Very relatable. Short yet strong !

I was hooked by the first 2 lines. It has a very nice theme of accepting yourself and not really be affected by others thoughts or views . The tempo was nice and the style very direct. Though as a poem it lack the most basic rhyme scheme, It the only glaring flaw present. Other than that, a powerful message, a painful truth .

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DEEP

I really liked the author's vision. It is DEEP . But as a poem it has no rhyme scheme. That is the only problem in this. I gave it this score because I realized what the author was going for and she did a good job in writing it out . Really enjoyed the message and concept.

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Nice, a good read. Good to see someone else goes through this as well.

I suspect the author wanted to vent and share a piece of her mind. And this feels very relatable and real. Rather aggressive, but it is a nice short read and complelling.

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Short and sweet.

I would not class this as a poem, because it has no rhyme scheme, but regardless, the passion of the writer was enough to convince me to overlook that. It can be said its more of a strong message/ speech rather than a poem.

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Really good read.

I really liked the author's vision. But as a poem it has no rhyme scheme. That is the only problem in this. I gave it this score because I realized what the author was going for and she did a good job in writing it out . Bonus points fo interesting use of Caps lock and great punctuation for emphasis. Really enjoyed the message.

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A Good message, a heartfelt realization

It inspiring. The author was going for and she did a good job in writing it out . Bonus points fo interesting use of Caps lock and great punctuation for emphasis. Really enjoyed the message .

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