Vanshika Gaur

India

Reading is hobby. Writing is for fun. English is not my first language. BTS Army since 2021.

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Mind-blowing story

I liked the way the writer writes and expresses the emotion of the character. But the thing I would say to improve is when you change the scene in story pls mention where it is or just add a sign in between the paragraph. You are very talented. But you often write the name of the characters wrong, it creates a little bit of difficulty in understanding the scene; pls take care of that also. All the stories you wrote I have read them waiting for updates in this story. Just mind-blowing :)

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Heart touching

It was just amazing and i can't believe that I completed rhe whole story in just 3days. It is really addictive.

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Beyond amazing

All the tings are just perfect but the inverted commas thing is a bit messed up or else I would love to recommend this book to my friends and must say that it just got my heart. Love it keep the work like this only:)

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