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FINALLY A GOOD WEREWOLF STORY!

I have personally read a lot of werewolf novels and story’s around folk tales to werewolf stories. Most lacked personality and character development while others seemed to be childish fantasy. You novel however reminds me that they are still some great werewolf stories out there, Lily is a sweet driven girl who I absolutely adore not to mention the story plot you had around her was amazing.

I couldn’t have asked fo a better werewolf novel, as the grammar and style of you writing was also very developed and good! God I’m still so amazed, I have worthy competition out there and I highly respect you for your work.

Great good!

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Adorable

This is my first read with Y/N read and happy to say i enjoyed it.

Grammar issues you need to fix and please use more detail. Those were my only issues but other than that the story itself is adorable and sweet.

Also when using details not that I have no idea what this character looks like so you have to give me your best examples of literary devices! If you ever need help im here lol

Hope you have a wonderful rest of your day again πŸ’— loved the book

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CUTE!

Such a cute romantic story! Romance isn't usually my style but some how you made it work for me!

Keep it up!

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The Girl and The Player

I'm sorry but this book lacked interest for me as a reader and a fellow writer. Yes, I will admit I am more of a fantasy reader but I think all genres have the potential to be great and have their own way of adding spice to the pot. Writing is like cooking and you have to do the best with the ingredients you have. As you become more experienced, your dishes will become more complex and flavorful with the abundant amount of ingredients you have and the skills you use to make those recipes.

In my opinion, you stroy just stated facts, there was no real storyline for me personally. You fell short in detail along with descriptions of settings and people. No to mention the grammar was off but Grammarly can help you out with that or just prove read and ask a friend. The "Third POV" could have added so much to this and made it more interesting but the delivery of that just wasn't there along with grammar but props for the spelling!

I can tell you grammar is a pain to get right. Hell, I still have issues with it myself.

But don't let what I say define you as a writer, you just have to work harder and I believe you can come back from this, I don't say it to rude or put you down but I say it as a way to wish for your improvement.

Not all feedback is good feedback. Not every review will put a smile on your face. I'm not here to discourage you or shame you. I want you to be better and I know you can make your dreams reality.

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Good

This story is sweet, simple and to the point in my opinion. I would use more details and paragraphs in the story but over all this is good work!

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Chapter 2? Please?

I can't help but feel a little envious of your novel so far as I am too a werewolf writer. Your story is so smooth and constantly alluring I honestly can't get enough. This is amazing and you have a talent for writing fantasy. I have to be wary of you because I can see your gonna make it big. The details and grammar are shell shocking and are amazing, not to mention the characters are decently described.

KEEP WRITING! YOUR GOING TO DO GREAT THINGS!

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Did someone say devil?

You have a unique little story here and it's honestly not that bad at all. I wished the characters were a little more developed with their emotions and have more details on there personality. Now I didnt read the full story but I'm not gonna lie, the drinking blood part was more of a vampire book than anything and the cross-reference doesn't seem that appealing. Like for demons to drink blood I can vibe with it but when I think the devil I think of burning to death. Not Edward trying get a sip of Bellas blood lol. But that's just my opinion, also I say this a lot but don't rush your story, give it time to boil and cook. Let the juice and flavor simmer, that's one of many recipes to a great story!

You have so much potential as a writer and I can't wait to see what you accomplished with your work!

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Nice

Over the story was good just try to make it more detailed and give more information of the story. But i love the story, and the story it has to tell but you could use more work or building up the story and feelings and emotion wise

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Werewolf Original

This werewolf novel reminds me of an older version as to how people use to write werewolf fiction. Talking wolves and so on, which I’m not against. Just when the wolves are speaking try to use a different font to tel the reader this conversation is basically going on inside their head. Other than that you story lacked in detail, imagery, and descriptive emotions and plots that the characters were trying to portray. It fell short and lacked the flavor of detail and spice as to me it was a typical werewolf story.

I know you want to go outside of that box so encourage you to be a little more imaginative and to add a little spice into the story. I’m not saying this to make you feel bad as I want to see you improve. You have a talent for writing and your grammar was great. But then again these are just my opinions, its up to you on how you want to move forward with this novel.

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Poetry

I read poetry and I personally write my own. This poetry book is not bad at all and has good relative meaning and the passages can be understood by its readers. People can connect with it but its a shallow connection. It doesn’t hit home for me, it doesn’t go into deep and trauma filled feelings. I wasn’t pulled into the poetry. No strings in my heart was plucked, no emotion. I read them as I would read any other passage.

Poetry is to help reflex an emotion and to tell a story, at least that’s is what i believe it to be. Your work is great its just needs to go deeper and give more illusions when writing but over all i think you have a good start.

I know you can improve so keep up the good work.

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Sexy Succubi πŸ˜—

Words cannot describe how amazing this novel is. The descriptions and characters are out of this world and I like the thick plot you have already created!

I enjoy fantasy as much as the next person, succubi being one of a favorite fae creatures and you have brought my dreams to life! The action and raw disclosed sex is a story I can get behind. Holy shit your going to go so far and I can't wait to read what comes next.

Keep on writing! Your destiny is in your hands and no one can say otherwise.

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Wow!

I like the relationships you developed here and ngl the main character is a woman achiever and that's inspirational. That's probably the best part if the novel includimg the writing stype and details you have added!

Great job!

Sorry for the late review πŸ˜…

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Hybrids and Alpha

Ok i love your plot. It's very creative and so unique I think this could be an amazing story!

But it falls short n detail and dialog. The gramar is good but the way sentences are made out and how the story goes is very confusing and hard to follow. Work on editing in more detail and imagery for the setting.

But I love the storyline, and the Characters. Carson is a badass with a wicked attitude that I adore in female characters. I want you to keep up the good work here and try try try again!

Your going to go far❀😊

Hope this doesnt offend you when reviewing my story

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Not human? Dam right with those grey eyes 🀭

The descriptions you use in the story are awesome! It's a seductively juicy story and honestly, I am highly interested in the work ethic!

I love Damian's POV of things as in ways it reminds me of a character I'm writing right now. I like a killer who can finish his job without hesitation and one who doesn't think he is human enough to well you know be HUMAN! Which is great!

Destiny was also a character I like because even though I didn't read much on her I could feel her determination for survival and it makes me in a way proud because she again reminds of characters I've seen before but with a great twist.

I'm going to read more of this novel for personal reasons alone, you really outdid yourself and you should feel nothing less than pride for the novel you have created.

Hope to see your opinions on my book meet the same criteria but I doubt it lol ❀

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Grey or Blue? Which to choose 😁

You sorry was amazing, and I really did enjoy the read. The way your described your characters was cute and very well put as I can already get a feel for them and thats what makes a good story!

Not to mention you cover is so well illustrated and mature it brings the story itself into a whole new light. However I would recommend taking out those commas after every speaking line. They aren't necessary and are a little distracting but other than that you got a great story and and even brighter future!

Keep up the good work, for you are talented.

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Great Story!!

Such a delightful πŸ’• story! Loved it the moment I stated to read it!

Keep up the good work! 🀘🏾

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Great Story!!

Such a delightful πŸ’• story! Loved it the moment I stated to read it!

Keep up the good work! 🀘🏾

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Very Creative!

Sorry your review took so long! Inkitt hasn't been working for me as of late and I haven't figured out why πŸ˜….

But over all your attention to detail in the story is astounding and I love the descriptions you use in the story. The writing style is similar to most but you add in a touch of something more.... how you say... a distinguished and mature tone for readers much older. Which is great, its good to know you have a clear audience in mind when you read the book.

My only faults are how long the paragraphs are and the length of the chapters. If its took long readers won't be able to keep up the interest. I personally had problems with it because of the fact that there were so many words I couldn't keep track of where I was.

Also what the summary? What pulls in readers and wants you to continue reading? They needs to be some hints of mystery.

But other tham those minor issues you story is golden!

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End it By The Gun

You gramar and creativity needs work. The summary was good but it felt like you told the story and there was nothing that wanted me to continue reading. Also the gramar was very odd to me, your speaking lines lack emotion and dept thats resolves around the dull way you express characters emotions.

His carrer is going down hill and he has nothing to show for his hard work, I would be a depressed if I was him and I fell like his wife should encourage him to write one more book and that's where the adventure starts.

But that's just mine opinion, even though this book wasn't my cup of tea I still think it has potential and you can create an amazing story!

Don't give up hope!

Hope this doesn't impair your review on my book 🧑

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Wonderful

I love your writing style! It's very illusive and captivating. Only thing I find hard to follow is where the story is taking place, it gets a little bit confusing because you don't give accurate descriptions of the setting and what they are doing. So work on organizing you thoughts but that aside you gramar is great!

Sorry it took so long to review, please dont forget to do mines aswell 🧑

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Vessel

Great story! I like the plot you have going so far, a few grammar issues here and there but it happens to the best of us!

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Sexy and Gay? Love it 🧑πŸ”₯

I love you descriptions of the characters and how smooth of a read it is! The anticipation after every chapter is just what a good story needs not to mention your novel is spicy as hell and I love it.

Each description you use is so bold and well defined and it just brings the LGBTQ+ into a new light that im sure everyone will appreciate.

Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter, and also the only downside is how short the chapters are. Aim to make them a little longer if you wouldn't mind.

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Werewolves and Royalty

Hot dam, I will definitely be reading this in my spear time! The unique swing you put on werewolves is amazing and I can't help but fall in love with all of the characters! Steven is just as hot as he is ferocious and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Compared to my werewolves yours knocks mine out of the park πŸ˜…, hopefully your opinions on my book are just as good as mine, doupt it but a girl can dreamπŸ˜‚

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Cute Little Story

It was a cute little story and wasn't bad at all. The summary was good, work on punctuation and gramar and if you do that then your golden.

Also add more descriptions to your Characters and settings.

To me personally the stroy itself didn't make sense but I still enjoyed the read!

Hope this doesn't impair your review on my book.

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Disguise

The summary was so good, to me personally, the storyline didn't match that energy and the dish fell flat and lacked flavor. To me, writing is like a recipe and you didn't yet have the right ingredients to make the story and that's ok! No one except you to write Shakespeare in one day lol. I can see you worked hard and I commend your efforts, it just needs a little more elbow grease.

How you introduced the character at the beginning of the story fell short, you don't have to state everything like its a fact, add some type of creativity that the readers can enjoy and relate to. Now don't get me wrong I like your main character but you stated that she was raped and abuse. She didn't show any signs to me like she was abused or harassed.

Seeing is believing in my case but don't let this review get you down, you have so much potential as a writer and I know your work will make someone's day a brighter one. You just need more ingredients in your arsenal and I can promise you this story can be golden and maybe even surpass your limits as a writer.

I hope this helps you and doesn't discourage you.

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A Prince? Say no more!

Your writing style includes a lot of illustrations of the mind which I absolutely adore just make sure you don't add too much. The plot is cooked to perfection with every spice used to its upmost potential! Writing is like cooking and so far you have one hell of a recipe.

Keep it up! You have a fan here and I will continue to read you book in my spear time.

Ha, like you could stop me from reading this delicious story

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Cute

I like this story, it cute and simple with sweet characters and very good descriptions of all their relationships. But note not to rush information, give a little at a time.

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Highly recommend!

I have no doupt this story will make it big one day. It was such a delightful read and the characters are so cute i can't help but fall in love.

Paragraphs was the only issue for me, but other than that, its an amazing read and story.

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Well you got me Entranced!

I love the way you flipped the myth of the sirens in your own amazing way. I also get hints that you read some werewolf novels by the way you describe Sirens 'inner beast' but who knows. I'm a fellow werewolf writer and I just happen to see those hints, don't know if you meant to do that but either way, this is some really impressive work! Every description of the sirens and bloodshed was marvelous! Of course, a few grammar issues here and there but even the best writers mess things up.

You should feel really proud of this story and I hope you continue to writer and improve, you deserve it!

Congratulations on how you executed the story and how you were able to draw in the reader with every single sentence!

Best of luck! I know your gonna make it!

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Sweet

A cute little story, I enjoyed the chapters I partook in. Work on establishing detail and motive. You story had a great start but it feel through and I lost the spark that pulled me into the book. Keep the flavors simmering and this book will be great I promise you.

Work hard and be dedicated to your story

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Marvelously Delicious πŸ˜‹

Wow, wow, and wow! This book is a ironic blend of fantasy and fiction! I have read a lot of devils novels, stories and folklore along with their encounters, but it lacked the resolve and favor I was looking for, it didn't settle well and was majorly rushed. They didnt season the chicken, and baked it for half its time.

But you... oh God the flavor in this story was immaculent, and jucy! Writting is like a recipe and you clearly made a dish of writing so worth while and entertaining! You story is flourished with so many spices and fruits all cooked to perfection!

I envy you, your creativity for writing is amazing not to mention your writing style is well balanced.

You honestly deserve a metal for bringing back flavor into the devil writing world! I started to give up on devil novels until this story. You have truly opened up my world and I hope you continue to do so in the future.

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Tribes at its best

WOW WOW, oh and also WOW. I honestly don't know what to make of you book, it said its a drama but I never read a drama story like this before. Its so captivating and primal it pulls you in and never let's go.

You writing style is simple yeah it gives loads of information at one time, its a true work of art.

I hope this gets published one day!

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Nice

I like the other novel you wrote more than this one but it still has really good potential! I HOPE YOU KEEP UP THE HARD WORK!!!

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Hot dam

Ok I don't usually read romance but God dam girl after this I think I should! I love it, a few grammar issue here and there but who doesn't have those moments? But other than that its amazing and I don't say that too often about books. I'm kinda picky, but girl when I tell you, this book had me. Your really talented for thinking of such exotic ways of writing romance.

Your in your element and I hope to continuously see you in your element.

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Imaginary Friend

All I have to say is wow, I don't have many words for this story.

It's really good!

I do want to see more detail describing Sally and Tyler but other than that this is such an adorable story! Not to mention kinda sad, but the sadness and mystery make it all the while of reading. So many questions pop in my head and I'm dying to know the conclusion! Please keep writing you have a great story in your position, use it to the best of your ability!

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Did someone say Playboy?

It was such a cute story I really enjoyed it and I hope you write more on this! Not to mention it's a gut buster, also saying I wouldnt mind if Xavier rearranged mine πŸ˜…

Aside from that I love it.

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Well I be dammed, SO COOL!

Your grammar and writing skills are awesome and I love the literally devices you use when writing! The story is so eye-catching and alluring I couldn't help but read more. Now somethings are not described to the fullest extent which kind of made the first chapter a little confusing but overall I really liked it.

Don't be afraid to add more detail when writing!

I hope you keep writing and achieve your dreams

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Broken Princess

The general idea and motivation you have for this story is astonishing and I like the way you use and describe your characters. It just goes to show how much of an amazing writer you will be and the mass amount of potential you have. I am already very fond of this story and I wish to continue reading it, even though it is not things I usually read. I wish your story the best of luck this world has to offer! Continue writing I would love to see your books published one of these days.

Best of luck!

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The chosen one

They characters in the story are cool and it bring a different type of illustration to the the world! This book is most likely one of the most interesting books I have ever had a pleasure of reading.

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I'm Lost

I like the plot you have for the story but it was poorly executed. I'm sorry this story could have been great but the gramar and the relationship to the characters weren't clear. You keep using the title Alpha when its not necessary also the POV are extremely hard to follow in my opinion. You switch them so casually I can't tell who I'm reading about anymore.

But even with all that, I can say the plot was the best part of this story by far and its the only thing that has been keeping me going.

Work on organizing your thoughts and characters and this story can be gold.

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