Nadja Losbohm

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Creepy! I want more!

"Sacrificed" is a really nice and creepy short story. I like the author's writing style and use of short sentences, which gives the story a nice fast pace, matching your wild heartbeat as "Sacrificed" is so thrilling. I especially like the ending. It really makes me want to read more about the cloaked figure and the girl. Maybe worth a try to write a bit more?

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