Najafi Raza

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great start

I must say for a person with English not being their first language you are doing quite well. A few grammatical corrections and a bit of magic of your imagination and you can do wonders. Take my little advice there will be people who would criticise your work, please don't let that stop you from continuing your work. Keep imagining keep writing and keep smiling. You got this

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nice work

overall the writing style is impressive........... the grammar is on point and the plot is great

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great

overall very nice story. very impressed with the story line

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Good

The overall plot of the story is amazing. I really liked the style of your writing it is Beautiful. The story seems to be short and sweet but the only problem that I have with it is being very fast. There is so much going around story, maybe you can slow the pace, one thing at a time. I feel there is so much that can be added to the story increasing its length (details and stuff). I really liked how the writer made her character to stand for herself and decide who is worth forgiving. Overall a very nice story, a little rushed, good grammar, great plot.

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