Nakita_Dekle

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GREAT BOOK!

Since it's a fantasy book. I feel the world building needs a little more fleshing out. Also because it's fast paced, it would be great if the chapters were a bit longer. I love the descriptiveness of the characters emotions. Great work done by the author. The african feel us awesome

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Amazing

Its an interesting read and I cant wait to see what happens next. Please watch out for petty grammatical mistakes though. Overall, I enjoyed reading this book

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Great

The plot of the story is great..really good. Cant wait to read more of this book. The dialogue has also been written well. There were a few cliches but there were also unique themes weaved into the story. There were typos and grammatical errors but the description of places and people was really immersive.
I love that Erik's wolf has a name.
If it's a fast paced novel, it's really good. I feel the characters need a little more fleshing out but I think I'll see that in the upcoming chapters.
Great read and I recommended it to a friend even.

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Great book

The plot of the book is good. Great even. I feel like the characters need to be a bit mature. For college graduates, they talk and act like high school students. Also, I feel like that Chlo and Austin's relationship happened too fast. There hasn't been any huge obstacle for the couple to go through. A bit more spice and ups and downs could really improve the book.
If we could have a few more flashbacks or scenes on how Austin and Chlo became friends and how their relationship was would improve the book. It would help to deepen our(readers) emotional attachment to them.

I did notice a few grammatical errors but nothing too serious. I feel Chlo is a bit childish though. But that's just my opinion really.

Overall, it was a pretty interesting read. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Ps.:I absolutely love the plot

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Blood and Crowns

I hope it keeps you hooked like it kept me hooked

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