Naldo Goto

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Hard Tomatoes:3

Totally 10/10 feedback right here with hard tomatoes as the score but really it got me running; it got me jogging for a while; then to a sprint; then to a casual; then to a stop. A lot of things happened. Great read. Would except much for harder tomatoes though. All in all, group hug ~just do it.~:3
In numbers:

Positives (+)

Story 1:
1.6/3

Story 2:
2.5/3

Story 3:
1.15/3

Plot 1:
2.1/3

Plot 2:
1.11/3

Plot 3:
0.6/3

Identity:
0.14/3

Impact:
1.9/3

Innovation:
0.5/3

Execution:
1.1/2

Vision:
1/1

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14.9/30

Negatives (-)

Story 1:
0.5/3

Story 2:
0.1/3

Story 3:
0.4/3

Plot 1:
0.2/3

Plot 2:
0.9/3

Plot 3:
1.00/3

Style
0.5/3

Core
0.1/3

Elements
0.5/3

Cliches
0.15/3

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3.4/30

Neutrals (+ or -)

Progress (+)
2/2

Development (+)
2/2

Potential (+)
2/2

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Total
17.5/30 ;-totally did enjoy it-:

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Pretty Good

Personally, I liked it in a sense that there is a radiant atmosphere when I was reading. It goes to show that there is a "soul" writing these poems. A valiant effort in emulating the style of "fire and fury" to balance out the "beauty and grace" that these kinds of poems are supposed to show.

Meaningful, most definitely.
Relatable, could be.
It is important that it remains this way because people tend to be lost with their own souls with the twists and turns on the way to finding oneself so... advantage.

There were some punctuation errors but not really so relevant to the actual structure of the poems like 5.Great Spirit: "Your love the joining thread, My last wish is oneness with you..." which would be more suitable to be a period rather than a comma but that's just me.

In numbers:

Positives (+)

Poetry 1:
0.12/3

Poetry 2:
1.4/3

Poetry 3:
1.5/3

Plot 1:
1.7/3

Plot 2:
1.7/3

Plot 3:
1.7/3

Identity:
0.4/3

Impact:
2.1/3

Innovation:
0.6/3

Execution:
1.2/2

Uplifting:
1/1

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11.7/30

Negatives (-)

Poetry 1:
1.00/3

Poetry 2:
0.5/3

Poetry 3:
0.3/3

Plot 1:
0.9/3

Plot 2:
0.9/3

Plot 3:
0.9/3

Style
0.1/3

Core
0.1/3

Elements
0.3/3

Cliches
0.4/3

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1.13/30

Neutrals (+ or -)

Balance (+)
2/2

Atmosphere (+)
2/2

Potential (+)
2/2

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Total
15.6/30 -just a good one to stop by and read-

Anyways, it's a good read if you wish to be uplifted for a soulful day:3

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