This is a story of people that have special powers and are being persecuted because of them. Some parts of this story did not make any sense to me, as the story had no body to speak of. People were rescued but then what? This story should be rewritten, and revised with a beginning,(Why these people are born mutants, and why they are being persecuted.) Middle, (What do they do once rescued, do they form an army and fight for the right to live, do they stay hidden to stay alive, what are their plans, their future?) The ending, (Do they become a country in their own right, Do they gain their freedom, how does their story end?) If revised, this could be an awesome story.
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