Nashra

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You don't have to be a prodigy to be unique ✨

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A great start!

I'd say that you have a great potential to describe the start of the book. You did it in a very simple, delicate and perfect way. The starting got me hooked and you wrote the summary in a way where the readers would get curious to know more. I've read the book so far and it's perfect in its own way.

Keep writing, keep inspiring :)

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Breathtakingly Emotional!

Oh my God! This was probably one of the best books I've read. Your book was filled with emotional breakdown. I found myself crying a couple of times during the hospital scenes. It was so beautifully written and deeply described. I really appreciate the attention you've given to this amazing book. From the cabin to their ending, it was a breath taking journey!

I can't wait to read more of your books. Keep writing, keep Inspiring :)

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Best horror writing style ever!

Wow... Like, WOW! I'm thrilled by the way you described everything so neatly. I really suggest you to mostly write horror stories because they're really well written here. Good luck! :)

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I've just started reading this book, and it's very mind blowing! Hopefully, the next chapters would be interesting too. Can't wait to continue! Make sure to give my book a try too! 🤩

I practically liked the way the scenes were created.
Nothing in this book is way too dramatic nor too less dramatic.
I really like the good way of turning out a really nice story to a wild imagination!

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The introduction to the book was extremely intriguing that got me hooked which was also the reason behind finishing the book within some days as it needed to be carefully read and reviewed. The way of describing the characters was very professional and I didn't find any mistake regarding the description and character building as it was perfectly flowing according to the story. As for the plot, it was equally worth reading. The magical sensation in the plot was incredible. The character, Theron was intriguing. She was shown quite brave and wouldn't give up no matter what. Overall, I'd recommend this book. Apart from some punctuation errors, the writing style, plot and everything else was incredible and I'm glad I read it just in time. The feelings and consciences of the characters were perfectly described, easily showing instead of telling which was a key point in the story. Good work :)

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Such a beautiful story!

From the beginning to the ending, this story was amazingly written. I'm very impressed from your work. Your descriptions were extremely incredible. I love Sid and Benji! Finally, they had a happy, yet rush, ending!

Keep writing, keep inspiring :)

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A perfect happy ending!

From the beginning to the end, everything in this book was utterly beautiful. The blend of emotions and the scenes, characters, names and actions were purely genuine and amazing. I loved how strong Elizabeth was till the end. Even though, I was a little sad when she rejected Hayden for the second time but I knew from the beginning that Mark was hers... It was a very happy ending and how you explained soccer in every detail was much appreciated.

I really enjoyed reading how enthusiastic the end was. I wish you all the good luck for your next books. I can't wait to read more books of yours.

Keep writing, Keep inspiring :)

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What an awesome book!

One of the few books with five-star rating! I have loved this book from the start. A perfect blend of emotions. I can't wait to read all of your upcoming books and those that are still written there.

I loved the characters specially Heidi ( she made many mistakes though ) but I was glad how everything happened in the last few chapters between Heidi and Cosmo.

Keep writing, keep inspiring :)

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I personally enjoyed reading your book. I really loved how you have a great potential to start and continue the story in a way where it feels like a perfect flow of words.

The only thing missing was the description. I would suggest that instead of using "three minutes or two minutes later..." You should describe as to what happened in those minutes too so that would, not only increase your use of words but would give a perfect description.

The thing I liked is how you create a good imagination in readers which is a rare thing to spot these days. I loved the plot, storyline and characters.

Keep writing, keep inspiring :)

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Perfectly written .... WOW!

This is one of the few books that hold my full rating because of how perfectly everything was placed. I loved Samuel from the beginning. He was so bold from the first but of course we can't forget the twists too. It contained pure and lovely emotions. I loved this book :)

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An amazing book by an amazing author!

I'd totally recommend this book to all my friends because you're an amazing author! I've read almost all of your books and one by one, I keep giving their reviews since all of them hold an important place in my list :)

This one, however, was very very detailed and full of emotions! I have also read Show me, Sensei, and I must admit that it was also an incredible piece.

Keep writing, keep inspiring!

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Awesome!

I'd say that this book was totally worth reading. None of the paragraphs were boring to read. They had equal interest in them. However, one thing that disappointed me were the mixed up lines and paragraphs which made me skip some lines at the start with breaking the continuity.

I would like to say that this book was a perfect definition of an emotional roller coaster. From the beginning, I'd gotten a quite good interest towards it. I can't wait to read more just to make sure that I'm still continuing it. It contains all the necessary words to describe the emotions contained in it, PERFECTLY.

Can't wait to read more of your books Soon!

Keep writing, Keep Inspiring. :)

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I would say that this book is worth reading. I have just started reading it and I'm totally hooked. I often don't read it till the end when I don't feel like it but this one definitely needs a read. You have done a really good job back there and I appreciate your skills. You have a potential to write.

Apart from the grammatical and some punctuation mistakes ( which can be undone by the editor ), the story was overall a good rating. I would definitely suggest it.

The introductions were also professionally described but one thing that disturbed me was just the long paragraphs and mixup that was messing with the story. I'm not reading this for a swap though I really felt like it. And I really did read it.

Keep writing, keep Inspiring! :)

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Please update

I know I'm being too fast lol but your books are so amazing and I can't stop before giving all of them a look. This one looks good too as for the others. Please update fast. I can't wait to read more! :))

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Omg

I've read two of your books but this one was BOOM!! seriously, it was so amazing. But I was thinking if you could tell us a little more about it lol. But as a one chapter story, it was a-a-amazing! Thank you for writing such an awesome piece. Can't wait to read more books of yours. PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND UPDATING FAST!

Keep writing, keep Inspiring :)

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New Beginnings

It is honestly one of the few books that I give full rating to. Every scene in this book is beautifully written and professionally placed. I really like how jolly the author gets time to time but one thing that hurt me was how abrupt Liam and Avery winded up everything. If Avery could've taken a therapist earlier with Liam, I guess the ending would be smooth and less complicated. And Hailey with Liam was a good idea too but Avery was a protagonist so I guess it was a little abrupt for me.
Apart from some time to time grammatical and punctuation mistakes, the book was goodly written.

Keep writing, Keep Inspiring. :)

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Awesome!

I've read almost all of your books and this one was so far, very awesome. I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you for such an amazing book. Keep writing and keep Inspiring :)

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Perfect in it's own way!

I really loved the story from the start - as in how you started the point of Piper... It was very nice. I enjoyed reading it :)

But there are some things that made me inquire the writing skills at the end of the story. There was a little rush at the end, as in why did Piper not elaborate everything at the end to Tatum's family? How can Josie and Harris be so normal at the end after being so cold over the years? I do understand that they were very bad tempered since the beginning and that, the human nature does change.

But anyways, I enjoyed the book and it's Perfect In it's own way! Keep writing more :)

I can't wait to read more of your work :)

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Another amazing piece!

I just completed "Texting Him" as you may have guessed from the review I have it. And right now, I just completed this awesome piece. It was really lovely. Focusing on Andy and Vincent, I really enjoyed it!

Thank you :)

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Totally cool and new!

Wow! This was the best story so far. I've read it whole in one day and was super impressed. Your writing skills are amazing! I'm gonna read another book by you very soon. Have a good day :)

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Abrupt yet speechlessly amazing.

I really liked the story and enjoyed every chapter thoroughly. The scenes were purely perfect. However, I felt sad at how abrupt the ending was. It should have been dragged further. I hope there's a sequel to it.

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This was such a good book.

I'm speechless right now. First of all, the last few chapters were so emotionally relatable. 😥😥
I seriously wanted to cry when I read all about this... You're such an amazing writer and you blend in the emotions so perfectly!

I don't have enough words to explain how perfect this book actually is!
Keep writing and stay happy :)

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Three Linked Beautiful Stories!

"The Jealousy Game", "All Bets Are Off" and "Pranking The Bad Boy" ... All your books are breath taking! I really loved each of them and the way you link all of them, is just Speechless!

Thank you for writing such an awesome piece. Please keep writing these amazing books!

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Speechless.

This is surely one of the special books that I'm giving full rating. You've got Outstanding Writing skills. The way you created each scene was perfectly speechless. You've got a great talent to write. When I found out that Marley and Logan are back together after the big fight, I seriously had a tear in my eye lol. It was downright emotional. Thank you for such an awesome book for your readers to interact with! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work so, please don't stop writing and update perpetually so we won't miss your awesome books :)

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Loved it!

I really really loved the book. The sad parts in the book honestly made me cry and it was heart wrenching. However, you described each scene in a perfect way. And I'm too eager to read more work of yours. I hope you perpetually continue your writing for the readers waiting to read out there.

Thank you! ~ Nashra ✓

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Perfectly Written!

I honestly loved this book. You're an excellent writer and I think you should continuously write something more like this. This book is perfectly Written.

I love the plot and storyline. The names of characters are amazing plus the emotional connection between the scenes.

In every way, the book is perfect. I love your writing style!

💜💜💜

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Perfectly Described!

This is not a quite thorough review because the book you have written is perfect!
But I'm guessing that you've stopped updating it? Or I guess it's complete. However, the ending was a little abrupt if and only if, you've decided to complete it but if it's still going on then a little more description wouldn't hurt :)

Thank you for writing a great book. Can't wait to read more of your work :)

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Omg! What just happened?

The story was soooooo cool! But the ending looked a little incomplete. It just didn't sort out? Anyways, the review doesn't need to be thorough. Just one word ..

PERFECT!

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Perfectly Written

This is the best book I've read so far. The fact is, I love the emotionally affected sides of the book. Next, I really wanted to give a thorough review about it.

At first, when I started reading the book, I was confused on how Bryan had his name changed to Ace all the time but you thankfully cleared it in the last few chapters.

Secondly, I was really mesmerized when the bullet part arrived and for your deep descriptions about each scene.

Thirdly, I really really love the ending! It's perfectly written. And I'm hoping you'll write more books on Inkitt.

And finally, I love how you show Inkitt in your book. It's a good side.

I'm looking forward to reading more books by you on Inkitt. :)

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Perfect!

I really like the way the characters are shown. I haven't started reading it thoroughly yet, although I know for a fact this is definitely the genre I love to read! I'll surely read it more and comment on the upcoming chapters so you would know I'm not missing any updates :)

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Best High School stories!

Oh my God! I can't imagine I'm reading to a PERFECT high school drama type story. The way you blend these emotions is just mind blowing! I can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you for this amazing piece! :)

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Perfect!

This book is amazing. I've read Jade and was happy to find Jade II
But the updates are getting slower. I can't wait to continue this! Awesome work. :)

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Unbelievably exciting! 🤩

This book is way more interesting than I thought it would be! The way you blend in the emotions of the characters, the lovely side scenes and friendship is very much of a delight! I'd love to know more about your upcoming books. And the genre you chose, is perfect in the way you describe it. ☺️

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