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The Monster

Lane is out of a two-year relationship and she is feeling lonely. Until she is greeted by a man that seems to be perfect. He has a perfect job, a perfect personality, and most of all perfect body. ...

Thriller / Romance by Nataliethemilf • Ongoing • 1 chapter

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Thirty-two by Teresa LeBrocq
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Wow.

Wow. Your story left me asking so many questions. Why is she working for the government? What happened to her husband? What happened to her baby? Who is the man she is trying to kill? I am hooked I hope to read more in the future. Great work.

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Monster by Kyran Shadows
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Great Read

I loved the plot and honestly would love to have a story like this on my shelf but the one thing I had a hard time coping with is your grammar. Honestly, I struggle with grammar this can be a quick fix I usually use Grammarly and would recommend it.

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