A Book Worth Publishing
"Ronin: A Sword that Cuts the Heavens" is a great book. I've always liked historical fiction, especially of different cultures (such as Eon) and this book is another one to add the list. The cultural descriptions & definitions are woven into the story nicely so as to keep the reader interested and informed while not overwhelming them with information or leaving the reader bereft of understanding.
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The characters and their personalities are well developed as well and work well with one another. The fighting scenes aren't overly fancy or too descriptive and aren't unrealistic. The scenery is very nicely depicted. Another part that makes the story more pleasurable to read is the atmosphere it creates, sucking the reader in so they can see what's going on vividly without being overly detailed.
Grammatically there aren't many errors but those can be fixed by just going back and doing some simple edits. Overall, the book is well written and worth reading. It's one I'll gladly keep in my reading list.