This poetry collection was very good. It has a lot of potential.
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But, I did find some errors that you can rectify from various sources. At this point, I should mention that this is to be helpful and not spiteful. I mean you well.
Firstly, your grammar was off here and there. Secondly, big words.
I write poetry myself and have read tons of it even outside of school and college. And I've noticed two things: One, the grammar and spelling should be more or less correct; in the sense that it should be correct enough to convey the same meaning that you have in your mind. Two,using big words does not equal poetry. What I have learnt is that poetry is simply a form of expression, like, although different than, prose. The major difference between poetry and prose, in my opinion, is rhythm, A poem does not have to rhyme; one does not have to read Shakespeare and Frost and imitate them in order to become a poet. Poetry is a rhythmic expression of an idea. It simply has to flow like a river.
Now, the only poem I liked here was the very first called "Life". That was very beautiful. For the other two, I didn't like how I had to keep coming across words I had to search in the dictionary. You may keep the ideas, but break up the words, in such a way that the meaning is retained.
As for the grammar, if you're not confident about editing it yourself, ask someone who is better at the language to helpful. It's okay to do that. :)
Other than that, I say again: I really, really think that your poetry book has a lot of potential.
Well done! You've actually come a lot of way! I mean, writing poetry is not easy! :D
I wish you the very best of luck in your writing journey!