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Hi! I really enjoyed reading this story. The plot was interesting and the characters were likable. I did get lost quite a bit in the names. I had to reread a lot of parts because I wasn't sure who you were referring to. You spent so much time explaining who was related to who that it was difficult for me to get into the plot of the story. As the story goes on, it does get easier and the plot is great! I love Maggie. I really enjoyed reading your work!

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