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Extremely enjoyable

I think it's an exciting story with a great writing style. The characters are amazing they are round characters as in you can see all sides of them from humour to deeper emotions. The way the story is written keeps me engaged and always coming back for more!

I think maybe a little more description in terms of showing not telling and there are a few grammar issues here and there but I personally don't pay much attention to grammar as a reader so don't quote me on it, Other than that I loved the story and would definitely recommend it :)

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Loving it

The writing technique and plot kept me coming back for more.

I enjoyed the details and descriptions. This story reminded me of many other stories I love which definitely added to the wow factor of the story.

The writing technique is just perfect for the story and expressed everything very well.

Great read :)

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Page turner

I loved this story.

It was not only an incredibly well-written story but it was also relatable because I remember being scared to play games like this in school (games like bloody mary or Charlie Charlie when I was younger) because of the things I heard about them and this story proved me right!

I enjoyed this story very much and loved the suspense in it.
I didn't pick up on grammar mistakes but I personally don't pay much attention to it anyway so as far as I am concerned the grammar was great :)

The writing style was very engaging and the plot was extremely intriguing! Great job :)

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Great idea

This story is definitely interesting and very enjoyable however the more grammatical side of things is a little off.

The plot is unique and the way the story is flowing is very creative.

Some things I noticed:
The punctuation needs a little work.
You have changed tenses a lot which is something many of us struggle with (including myself)
I feel like it could be better?
I don't know how to explain the last one I just feel like something about the writing style feels incomplete.

The story itself:
I am not that interested in this genre of books but this one was definitely more enjoyable than I thought it would be. It left me wondering and I think the plot itself is excellent.

Note: Don't be disheartened or offended by this it is just my opinion πŸ’•

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Kept me coming for more

This book made me feel extremely intrigued by the creatures, myths, legends and wonders of the world which the author created. I especially liked part three when they discuss the devil because it has to do with things I heard at school when I was younger.

I knew this book was going to be one I truly enjoy from the introduction. I raced through the chapters. Definite page-turner. I love the point of view the story is presented in and I think maybe more showing not telling would help build imagery. I would certainly recommend the book to others! Great job :)

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It's incredible

I love the writing style. The story is inspiring and very interesting. It keeps me thinking about what will happen next! The suspense is real. I can tell that effort went into every detail. I was directly drawn to the story and delved into the world of wonders this story creates. I love it so much. Keep it going!

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I liked the story very much. It included a mix of a few main genres and there was lots of suspense to keep me going. I found the start a little bit dry but I am the type of person who gets bored very easily so it's normal. Loved it lots x

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