Night Shadow

Franklin

I write a wide variety of books, most of what I write is literally on impulse, and I'm always up to listen to criticism and advise on my books so please feel free to unleash on me! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

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love it!!!!

everything about this story is really good!!!! I can't wait until there is more to read! I was hooked within two chapters, and that is quite hard to do. The author's way of writing is very good to. Keep up the good work. From what I've found, not many people write about vampires in a good way. So this story makes me very happy!

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I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!

i was hooked after the first sentence!!!! I can't believe how amazing this book is and it's not even finished yet! I can't wait for more to be done!!!!!! i honestly think everything is perfect. it's moving at the rite pace and everything. I strongly recommend this book.

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Very Satisfying!

i was hooked in a matter of sentences. i just couldn't stop reading. i read everything in a day and i did it with having school from 7:45 until i got home at 4. there are not very many grammar errors at all, so that made me very happy. i also love that the story line doesn't move to fast.

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i want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really hope for more!!!!! i really do love how this is set up., you could literally go in any directions with this story.

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im a horrible person. haha.

To be honest, I laughed after reading this, but then i realized how this story is so true for most single mothers who cant provide for their child. Overall I really like the chapter, it was very good. I just realized that i was a horrible person for laughing.... considering that this could quite possibly be true for some child out there or a grown man or woman... Sorry if I was insensitive...

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love it

Me being the person i am, i accidentally started reading chapter 15 before starting chapter one, but after reading the first paragraph i was hooked. everything is amazing and i love it. there were parts i felt could have had more, but i really cant complain about how the story is. once i started reading i couldn't put it down. i can't wait to read the next book!!!

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NICE

I read the whole thing in less than 5 hours. i was instantly hooked by the story and i cant wait for the next one.

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loved it!!!!!

This book felt to me like it represented life in general. everyday real problems, some fantasy to make it interesting, and something that is a common thing for children to go through, albeit not to that extreme but close enough. I really liked it!

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MORE!!!!

All in all this story is very good. I do hope there will be more added on soon. The pace of the story is perfect in my opinion.

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I love it!!!

Everything is great about this story. The characters are amazing and the way the plot is built up is really good. the ending is amazing as well. I can't wait for the next book!

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i don't know how to react to this...

The plot is very good and so is the writing style used. although the way this story ends makes you want to read more. I do sincerely hope that the author writes another book to follow up this one. overall i really do love this book!

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god. my heart.

this is such a good story. I love the plot of it and the characters are amazing! Everything about this book is amazing! Props to the writer!

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It's so cute!!!

The overall story is very good. I really liked it, but what I liked most was the epilogue. OMG! It's so freaking cute!!!!!!! I love all the characters in the story to.

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kyle's revenge

This story is amazing! I started to read it because I was bored, but after the first chapter I was hooked. The way the siblings are together and how all the brothers act toward the girls mates is the best! The ending was great to. The only thing I didn't like was how the chapters flowed to one another, but other than that, I really think more people should read this.

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