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I'm intrigued

Hey Sofia, honestly good job on the story. From the chapters I've read, I'm intrigued to see what happens in the future. That being said, I feel like some dialogues aren't needed. Grammar could be corrected a bit but a fantastic job. I can't wait for the story to be finished. Would binge read it at once. See you when I give another review.

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