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Nikki's Review

The raw and unique nature of both the plot and characters in this book was truly great. The author's writing was so skillful that I could vividly see everything unfolding in my mind, almost like watching a movie. It made for a compelling and immersive reading experience. This was a very good read, and I found myself eagerly turning the pages. I'm genuinely looking forward to reading more from this author, as they clearly have a talent for storytelling that resonates with readers. Keep up the excellent work!

Nikki's Review

Having read up to chapter five, I'm already excited about where your story is headed. The way you've introduced the characters and set up the world is intriguing. I can sense the potential for greatness in the way you're building suspense and weaving the plot threads together.

Nikki's Review

"Save Me Moon Goddess" packs a spicy punch and keeps you engaged throughout. The characters are well-crafted, and their interactions are sizzling. The plot is well thought out, offering a tantalizing blend of romance and intrigue that's sure to captivate readers. If you're looking for a steamy and engaging read, this book delivers on all fronts.

Nikki's Review

I've just cracked open this book, and I must say, the beginning shows a lot of promise. The author has introduced us to some interesting characters with depth. The potential for an engaging story is evident, and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. I have a feeling this book is going to be a satisfying read.

Nikki's Review

From the very beginning, the story is great, setting the stage for an engaging narrative. The characters are relatable and intriguing, and the plot is great, full of surprises. The author's writing style is fantastic, drawing you into the world they've created.

Nikki's Review

The writing style of this book is great it flows smoothly and effortlessly. The storyline is absolutely captivating, ensuring that I was hooked from the very beginning. The descriptions of the characters and their world are so vivid and believable, making it easy to become fully immersed in the story. I can't wait to see where the next chapters take these characters and the plot.

Nikki’s Review

The writing style in this book is good; it's easy to follow and keeps you engaged. The storyline, while interesting enough, also proved to be captivating, holding my attention from start to finish. I’ll definitely keep up for more.

Nikki’s Review

This story has a strong suspenseful build-up, but the short chapters leave you wanting more.

Nikki's Review

The author has shown great potential in crafting a gripping narrative. The story's premise is captivating, and the characters are well-conceived.

Nikki’s Review

This story has a lot of potential, but it needs some grammar and punctuation edits to make it easier and more enjoyable to read. The story is engaging, and the characters are well thought out. Fixing these issues will make the book better overall. I'm excited to see how the author improves in future works.

Nikki’s Review

I didn’t know exactly what I was getting into but the story was easy to follow and quickly pulls you into this vivid world the Author has created. Each character uniquely represents the essence of the world, the writing did a great job of showing most of the action rather than telling it. I look forward to following this Author’s work.

Nikki’s Review

This was short and easy to read. I love your writing style. The start was great and I was interested to know more about Elrond. The mystery around his memory and missing friend had good build up to a emotional ending. Good job Author.

My Review

the author's writing style- it's descriptive and well balanced. The plot is intriguing and the characters are quite realistic. The emotions have been captured and portrayed very well. The amount of sex appeal this story brings is just enough to keep you wanting more. I'd recommend it, Enjoy

My Review

This was right up my alley of things I like to read and write about. I loved the whole vampire bit and I enjoyed it. I would def recommend it to others who are into fantasy. Looking forward to seeing more from this writer.

Outstanding

Love the overall plot for this story. I found myself getting more and more pulled into the story. I think the author does a great job in capturing her reader's attention in the opening of the book. Great job.

Thumbs Up

This was so well written and honestly, this story delivers on a level of interest I was not expecting it to. It reminded me of a few movies I have seen with similar plots but the author does a grand job at uniquely telling this story and wow was I taken by it.

Good read

First off I love your cover. I read this and I absolutely love the attention you bring to social anxiety. I myself suffer from anxiety so I related very well to the character. I love how well written this was and can't wait to see where the author takes this story.

Loved it

This was well written and very captivating. I loved the relatable characters and how well this flowed. It’s just beginning but i feel like this read is going to deliver impressively. I’m looking forward to reading more of this. Kudos to the Author because I’m going over to read another one of her works lol.

Different

This was so different and not what I was expecting. I loved it from the first chapter. I love how uniquely it's told. Great Job Author.

Good Read

This story has so much potential. So far it's an eye-catcher. I think once the writer goes back and flesh out the book it will flow so much better. Other than that I would recommend it.

Great Story

Loved this, I really loved the characters especially finch I thought the flow of everything was great and it was easy to follow. Look forward to reading more.

Love

This was a really interesting take on a wolf story. I loved the romance, the mystery, the build-up of what's going to happen next. I enjoyed this book and congrats to the writer on this amazing story. Looking forward to reading more.

Woman's Best friend

Talk about loyalty and love. Horror is my next go-to genre and I must say this delivered in every sense of the word. It reminded me of Cujo and that is one of my favorite movies. I loved how deep his resolve was for getting vengeance for Nisha. I would def recommend this to a fellow horror fan. The author did an amazing job with their storytelling. It's a different spin on horror with the killer dog and I look forward to more from this Author.

Nikki's Review

The first few chapters of this book have left me with a sense of excitement and anticipation. The story has a great start, and I can already see the potential for a compelling narrative. The characters are intriguing, and the writing style is engaging. I'm looking forward to diving deeper into this book and discovering where the story leads.

Nikki's Review

This is a good one! The uniqueness of this engaging story had me hooked from the start. It's exceptionally well-told, with an ending that leaves you with questions and a craving for more. I eagerly await the next installment to see how things unfold.

Nikki's Review

The author's unique take on the classic story added a delightful layer of creativity that kept me entertained throughout. It's a nice, cute story to pass the time, offering a fresh perspective on a beloved fairy tale. I did find that the spacing in some of the chapters was throwing me off, and there was one chapter that repeated itself. Despite these minor issues, it's still a nice story overall.

Nikki's Review

This book offers a beautifully written narrative that is both emotionally charged and easy to navigate. It's a testament to the author's skill in storytelling, and I'm grateful to have experienced this captivating journey.

Nikki's Review

This book is undeniably very good. The spicy scenes were incredibly intense, leaving me utterly astonished. The build-up and introduction to the story, as well as the main characters, were exceptionally well done. As I continue to make my way through the book, I can't help but appreciate how unique and different it is from what I've read before. It's a refreshing change of pace and offers a captivating experience that keeps me wanting more.

Nikki's Review

This book is really funny. A socially awkward girl who summons a demon named Fred, and the humor is great. The writing is good too, with some revisions it could be better. The story started strong, but it got a bit scattered later on. Still, I loved the characters' dynamic.

Nikki's Review

I liked the characters in this book. They felt real, and I enjoyed how they grew and interacted. Their chemistry was great and made the story enjoyable. The spicy scenes, though, could have had more detail to make them more exciting. The plot was good and easy to follow, keeping me interested.

Nikki's Review

I really liked this book. The writing was good, and the characters were well-developed. I especially loved the dynamic between Juliana, Silas, Asher, and Belva. I was happy with the end. Good job, author!

Nikki's Review

"Following Amelia on her journey of self-discovery has been a remarkable experience. This character has endured significant loss, yet her unwavering determination to move forward is truly inspiring. As a reader, I've become emotionally invested in Amelia's story, and I can't wait to see how her journey unfolds and where her resilience leads her.

Nikki's Review

The first few chapters of this book have left me with a sense of excitement and anticipation. The story has a good start, and I can already see the potential for a compelling narrative. Though only three chapters I'm looking forward to seeing how the writer progresses with the story.

Nikki’s Review

The writing style of this book is commendable; it flows smoothly and effortlessly. The storyline is absolutely captivating, ensuring that I was hooked from the very beginning. The descriptions of the characters and their world are so vivid and believable, making it easy to become fully immersed in the story. I can't wait to see where the next chapters take these characters and the plot.

Nikki's Review

First, I want to say I love a good urban vibe and the plot here has hella potential to be an engaging story but with the writing style being all over the place it was hard to digest this and stick with the story. I was too busy being upset with the switch from novel to screenwriting. With a good format edit this would be good. The grammatical errors can be fixed and for the most part the slang didn't bother me of course. I hope you don't take any of the feedback you have gotten as a discouragement and instead apply what you're readers have advised and continue to create great work. Also Des is trash 🗑️. That is all lol

Nikki's Review

A captivating and well-crafted story. From the very beginning, it held my attention with its seamless flow and expertly written prose. The narrative moved effortlessly, making it an engaging and enjoyable read.

Nikki's Review

The plot is a true page-turner, filled with intrigue and mystery. "Soul Searchers" is a must-read for anyone who enjoys a well-written, engaging, and supernatural story.

Nikki's Review

As I read "Love Ladders," I found myself eagerly anticipating how things will unfold between Skye, Dallas, and Scott. The complexities of their relationships add an element of suspense and curiosity, making this book a page-turner.

Nikki's Review

This story choice of a first-person narrative with dialogue-driven storytelling is intriguing and has its merits but, a careful balance between dialogue and narrative, along with attention to clarity in dialogue presentation, could make this story even more engaging. The author has taken an innovative approach, and with some refinement, this story has the potential to stand out in its own unique way.

Nikki's Review

It's evident that the story holds significant potential, offering an engaging narrative that has the potential to captivate readers. You've crafted a storyline that has the makings of an enjoyable and immersive read. I've only read the first few chapters, but I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this thrilling story progresses. Well author for your efforts, and I look forward to seeing your future works.

Nikki's Review

Thank for the raw and realness of this. It's very relatable and you expressed those feelings and emotions very well.

Nikki's Review

It's evident that the story holds significant potential, offering an engaging narrative that has the potential to captivate readers. The author has crafted a storyline that has the makings of an enjoyable and immersive read.

Nikki's Review

The open line was what captured me, starting with such a gripping statement not only hooks the reader but also hints at a mystery that begs to be unraveled. This kind of narrative strategy is very effective in drawing readers into the story and making them eager to discover more.

Also, it's excellent that you use vivid descriptions that allow the story to unfold in a compelling way. Descriptive writing can help readers visualize the scenes, characters, and emotions, making for a more immersive reading experience.

Nikki's Review

"Hush, There Is No Need" has potential, especially with its promising beginning and intriguing plot. With some refinements in the writing style to balance "showing" and "telling" and improve clarity in certain areas, it could become an even more engaging read.

Nikki's Review

I've read up to Chapter Five, and I must say, the way your characters interact is captivating. Your dialogue feels natural and keeps me engaged in the story. Your descriptions are vivid, painting clear pictures in my mind. Great job, Author!

Nikki's review

Your story had me hooked from the start. The imagery you use is vivid and captivating. The characters are relatable and have distinct voices that make them feel authentic. The pacing was ok and because the chapters were so short I was able to get through this in one sitting. Though short it conveyed great building of tension and excitement with each new chapter.

Nikki's Review

I have too many pages up posted on wrong book sorry. This is in line though. Im at work getting my reading in.

My Review

I really enjoyed the overall plot of this story. It was dark and captive. It was easy to follow due to the writing style of the author. I would recommend this to others. Keep up the good work.

You know I loved it

Literally gave me new motivation, I loved every bit of this wildly captivating uniquely put together work of art. The author is clearly my storytelling twin (haha)...I have not finished but I look forward to reading more and seeing more from this Author.

P.S I wonder what dark universes we would harbor up together lol

Loved it

Wow, I’ve been reading a lot of good stuff on Inkitt recently but this story It was really wildly captive. It was written so well that I was immersed in the story until the very end. It is a long book for sure, but the best stories usually are. I would recommend this book because the author has a unique way of storytelling and I feel it's done in a way only this author know-how. Enjoy.

My Review

Wasn't really sure what I had gotten myself into once I first started but upon getting more into the story It was really wildly captive. It was written so well that I was immersed in the story until the very end. It is a long book for sure, but the best stories usually are. I would recommend this book because the author has a unique way of storytelling and I feel it's done in a way only this author know-how. Enjoy.

My Review

An awesome story I enjoyed reading it. This book truly managed to evoke a lot of emotions out of me. Hats off to the author for creating such an amazing piece of work!

My Review

Oh wow, first off I love this book cover for some reason it made me want to read the story. The overall plot of the story is great. I think the author tells the story well and it flows well. I look forward to the development of the story.

Thumbs Up

I love fantasy stories and I'm a huge fan of mythical creatures this story was so enjoyable for me. When a story can pull me into its world and give life to its characters and places that is what makes me want to keep reading. Good job to the writer.

My Review

It's only one chapter, but a great start to an amazing story. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing the development of this project.

Thumbs Up

I'll be honest this the first mystery thriller story I have read on here and It did not disappoint. I loved the imagery displayed in the writing and how well this flowed. Good job to the writer.

Potential

This story was good. It has all the potential to be great if the writer could figure out exactly where the story is going or work on getting the point of things across to the readers. Other than that I thought this was a great start.

Loved it

I was taken by the concept of this story before I even began to read it. I must say it is well written and was very enjoyable. I loved how detailed and descriptive the author was. I love the characters and look forward to reading more.

My Review

It's only two chapters so I don't have much to go on. I will say the story is well written and I loved the plot idea, it's different and I love a creative twist. I think it has potential and ill surely follow along to see how things develop.

Potential here

So much potential here with the overall plot of the story. I think once the author flushes out the chapters everything will flow smoothly. Other than that I enjoyed the read and would definitely recommend it. Please keep up the good work. I truly enjoyed this.

Good Job!

The plot itself is very different and I think the author does an amazing job of telling this story. The story is well written and flows perfectly. I loved all of the characters and look forward to reading more.

Thumbs Up

This author did a great job of telling her story. she gave you the facts upfront and in a way that made it intriguing to the reader. I love how she introduced each character and how well the story flows. great Job.

Awesome

Wonderful job to this author. This story flows well and is interesting enough to keep you turning the page. Well written and easy to follow. I look forward to seeing more work from this author.

Potential

This story has great potential. I think once the author goes over her final draft and flushes it out this story would flow amazingly. I loved the characters and besides a few grammar errors good job.

Potential

This story has great potential. I love the main character and look forward to following her journey and development.

Loved it

I was not sure what to expect but this was incredibly good. As soon as you start to read your captured by the mystery of what’s going on. I look forward to following Zach on this journey and seeing where his suspicions take him. 👏🏾 great job.

Its a Must !

This character was so amazing. I'm still reading but I just wanted to get my review in because I loved it starting from the first chapter. Kona is relatable and the writer is really good at storytelling.

Kudos

This was an amazing story and I loved her take on wolves. I love fantasy and this was one that I would recommend for others. It captures your attention very fast in the first chapter and as you read further you see how well written this story is and how easy it is to follow. Great job.

Cute

This was def a nice and innocent story, to begin with. I'm still reading but so far its captured my interest. I love the little love triangle I believe is forming not sure who I prefer at the moment still reading into the book. I can't wait to see where this goes and the potential this book has to develop into something amazing. Good job Author.

Good Start

So overall this was a good read. Once the author makes all of her corrections the story will flow together really well. Keep up the good work. This story has the potential to be great.

Poor Claire

This was such a good read. One chapter of pure suspense that keeps you on edge. I love horror so this was awesome. I would recommend to anyone who enjoys horror. Claire was left in such a state it was terrible. Good job to the author on delivery her writing skills was great. The story was easy to follow.

LOVE

My all-time fav is a story full of mythical creatures and this story takes a different spin on wolves and sirens and pulls you in immediately. I love the mystery in this story and the romance that's almost relatable lol. The author did an amazing job in her writing and I look forward to more.

Loved it

I am a huge mythology fan and I must say this was such a joy to read.

Good Read

This took me a while due to having tons of other things going on but I must say it was well written and an easy story to follow. The plot started off slow but as you read more you slowly get pulled into the story.

Must Read

So I totally forgot this was on my to-read list, but luckily I was looking for something good to read and I found something better than good. This book was amazing. I am a huge supernatural fan so this did what it came to do and that captured you and take you on this storytelling journey. Great job so looking forward to the next installment.

Amazing Story

I really loved how well this story depicts how hard it is to lose someone and the trauma that carries over from their sudden absence. I was taken in by the characters and found myself often thinking on my own loss experiences. The writer has a great way of storytelling and I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing. You are amazing I love your work.

I Loved it so much

This story was so well told and so well detailed and descriptive that it literally played out like a live action film for me. I was immediately taken in and hooked wanting more with each chapter that I finished. I never wanted it to end. The thought and time that went into putting this masterpiece together shows in how the story was uniquely broken down. I fell in love with each of the characters and went through different emotions as I read. I am honestly really inspired and I hope that one day I am equally able to present something as magnificent as this story was. I want to say thank you to the author because you sir did a great deed in giving us this well put together MOVIE lol.

Great Read

This was by far the most interesting story I have read yet on here. I was so into it , wanting more and more as the story progressed. I loved the story lines so intense and yet lightly humored. The emotion was perfectly fit in this story. Beautiful plot and even better writing skills. I would surely applaud the author for executing so well. Looking forward to reading more of your great work. I would definitely recommend this.

My Review

Your writing style is very engaging and descriptive. The plot is intriguing and the characters are quite realistic. Such an amazing piece of work!