Nitara Ramam

Good Book

The book is really good, The plot is interesting and something different from usual which I appreciate. Especially talking from the perspective Mickey, all that he encounters with the entity and the fights. However, I have just one complain sometimes it's difficult to recognize it's exactly which entity or say which character you are referring to. But the core of the story is really good. Would definitely love to read!!!

Great Plot

I really loved your book and the storyline, though at times it feels like there's lot description but then it still manages to capture the reader's attention due to suspense that prevails. I seriously love Ness she's bold yet timid it feels like there's so much more to her. I really wanna read more and know what happens next. I would really appreciate if you give more insight of the world and what it is, but if it's part of your suspense then you are seriously managing to catch reader's attention.
It just few chapters but I think your story has a lot potential.
Keep the good work 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I'll be eagerly waiting for what happens next ✌🏻

Must read Awesome Book✌🏻

The book was seriously awesome with all the action scenes and character driven especially, Toby the character development and depiction of his feelings was great. Like you could really relate what he meant.

I really love your writing style from POV since enables the most important thing in any novel i.e. character building it enables the audience to know your protagonist well. The best part which I personally love is the protagonist is not perfect he has his flaws and weakness but learning to live above them is beautifully depicted.

Your narrative of action scenes is seriously good like a person can imagine the whole plot the fights with icebreakers and all.

I faced only one issue is that I couldn't guess who was talking to who exactly at quite some places. But rest was serious fun with thrill and action. One thing I would suggest is that if you incorporate some sarcastic and epic dialogues especially during fights. Because awesome dialogues captures the complete essence.

But for the record I enjoyed reading 👍🏻👌🏻✌🏻