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Impressive Style and Atmosphere

You were able to very successfully develop a distinct atmosphere in the piece and maintain it throughout, which is very impressive in itself, and the inclusion of the vivid sensory descriptions was extremely tasteful and stylistic and further added significant value to the piece. Additionally, the dialogue was very well done from its use to advance the plot to the successful imitation of the spoken vernacular. Overall, your writing style was profoundly mature and Impressive. My only criticism was that I found the plot to be a little slow at points but overall, it was a great piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading from start to finish!

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