A sin of her own
I have just some minor 'problems', *that completely is an overstatement*. sooo. when you are writing about shifts or any other event which can be interpreted in more that one way just try to be more descriptive. and the second thing is that you didn't give a background to some characters their story of their past like in detail it's just a wee bit brief. and you are incredibly good at cliff hangers. one more thing is that I really liked is how you built the plot, hell a lot of suspense. overall a DAM good story. a tiny request is that I need her to be with true mate, I need her to kick his arse and turn him into a strong wolf. and yeah give that woman a dam throne. like, let her overthrow the elders or something. believe you kept me up all night.
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