This story is so fast-paced and full of twists. I like how exciting it was because I genuinely couldn't predict what would happen next. It's like a high-octane mix of thriller, fantasy, action, drama, and romance. I haven't read anything quite like it.
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Tara/Iden makes for an interesting character. Because of her memory loss, she and by extension, the readers, start off without a purpose but then that quickly shifts into a quest to solve the mystery of her new identity. And when she finds out she's Iden, she still has to make sense of her place in this crazy world she finds herself thrust into. That makes for a very intriguing story for a main character.
As for the other characters, I felt like some of them could be better fleshed out. Aside from her relationship with Gideon, I believe that the rest of Tara's interactions with the other characters could be built upon to give us a better sense of the story as a whole as well as provide clues to her ultimate role in it. This story has a lot of potential to be riveting, it just needs a bit of polishing in some places.
Kudos on your hard work and thank you for writing!