Nour Elfaramawy

Cruel Billionnaire

I got really hooked since the beginning. You have begun your book with an interesting chapter which made me want to read more of it. I really love how the plot is developing and I can’t see how it will turn out in the end. I hope you upload more chapters and keep up the amazing work!

The Halfway Perfect Town

The books is off to a powerful start and I hope you continue and upload soon because this left me hanging. I can’t wait to read more of your works. Keep up the amazing work.

How Mine Ends

I have not finished reading the book yet, but I am already in love with it. You have introduced your character beautiful and I love your detailed description of the character’s emotions and you set the tone perfectly. It only made me want to read more and more. It is definitely a page turner and I am looking forward to finishing the story! Amazing job!

Don’t Smie At Me

I honestly loved the story. What drew me most to the story was the title because it is absolutely intriguing. It is what made me start reading the book in the first place. After that, the plot, the characters and the dialogue was just amazing. It was a page turner and I really hope to read more of your work!!

The Dog

I usually do not go for horror stories because that is not really my thing. However, this story has changed my mind entirely! I must say that it always kept me on the edge wanting to know what will happen next. I had a hard time keeping my phone down to focus because I would always think of the next event. It was well written and I can not wait to read more of your work! Phenomenal job!

Kara

Though not a lot of chapters are uploaded, but I am hooked. Your story have captivated me in a unique way The storyline and the even are nothing like I have read before. Kara is such an amazing character and powerful too. I love the events that are unfolding and I can’t wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work!

Mythwield

I am not usually the type of person to read about fictional characters like werewolves and such but the concept of the story is new and intriguing. Though sometimes it was hard to keep up with the English so I suggest you just go over the paragraphs one more time to fix the grammar mistakes here and there but overall, I loved the story.

The Exit Plan

The thing I love the most about this story is that it adresses problems that we face and I am so enthralled by the characters. Their development is just impeccable. I hope you update soon!

Past Redefined

This story has held me captive from the very first chapter. I absolutely love the storyline and every scene in this story. The potential is so great and I really suggest that everyone reads the story because they will absolutely fall in love with the characters. The plot is unique and I haven’t read many like it before. Keep up the phenomenal work and I am really looking forward to reading more of your work ♥️

Promise

The story has great potential. I love how you started off your story and I hope you keep up the amazing work. The little grammatical mistakes could be easily edit. I wish you would upload soon!

Just One Favor

I can’t begin to explain how intrigued the story has left me, and I’m always left on edge. I really hope you update soon and not leave us waiting!! I’m really looking forward to reading more.

Happily Married

The characters are polar opposites and I guess that’s what I like most about the story. I love Audrey but hate Calvin for what he’s done and the way he thinks. He’s so cruel to her, but she’s starting to save her marriage no matter what. I don’t really like that aspect, but it’s realistic and that’s what matters. Great work on your story and I’m very glad that I have read it

Endgame

I love marvel with everything I am. And with you writing this story makes it much more interesting to me and appealing. The story is great and I love everything about it. I haven’t read it all, but I’m sure that the more I get into it the more addictive it will become.

Loners

I’m loving how you’re building up the events and how you’re proceeding with them. I can’t wait to get to the base of the story and I really hope you upload soon. You might want to fix the grammatical mistakes but they aren’t something that take from the beauty of the story. Keep up the amazing work!

Dreams of a Popcorn Seller

It wasn’t what I thought it would turn out to be. Definitely exceeded my expectations and I would recommend everyone to spend their time reading this.

The Thousand Words

I don’t know from where to begin. I mean this story has been by far the best story I have read on inkitt and the best mystery one too. I don’t understand how such a phenomenal work isn’t getting so much attention from the world. This story deserves to be a NYT best-seller, and I mean it. The storyline is very intricate and the buildup of the events was slow and full of suspension that it always kept me on edge, wanting to find out more. I highly recommend this story for everyone to read and I really hope it gets more attention. I have already told my friends about it because it deserves recognition. Phenomenal job!

Dracula’s Chosen One

I haven’t read that many stories about blood thrusting creatures and I was never interested in reading one. But I’m glad that I have stumbled upon your story. The beginning is really intriguing and it just holds your attention and you feel like you want more. I am in love with the way you described the settings along the chapters. Keep up the amazing work and I hope you upload soon!

Shame

The story is great, and the plot is very interesting. I suggest you describe what Julia or John feel rather than just stating them as the facts they are. Other than that, great work and keep up the amazing work.

Taste

The tension between the two characters is undeniable and it sure is thick between them. I feel like you’re losing some suspension by the rush of events. I suggest you slow down the events and add more emotions and more interactions between them. I love the story and I’m sure that the chapters that are to come will be amazing.

Staying With Her

The chemistry between Blackhawk and Clarissa is amazing. You surely know how to keep a reader interested and on edge throughout the story. The tension you have created between the characters is well built and is very addicting. I can’t wait for the coming chapters! Keep up the amazing work!

Very Good

I really like the first chapter and I believe that it’s well-written. I would suggest you shorten the paragraphs, but other than that great job!

I’m amazed

I have reached chapter 6 and I must say that I’m in love with everything about this story. I know that there’s a lot more to come and I’m sure that it’ll be just as great. I like Claudio and I hope he’ll indulge more in Luna’s life!

Nour

The story is off to a great start, and I am sure that I will stay tuned until you finish writing it. I just believe that the story might be somehow rushed. The events are falling in too quickly and it feels like some of the events are stated. Other than that, I really like the story!

The Social Misfit

I must say that this story is unique in its plot. I really enjoyed how you slowly dragged us along the events. I really like the main character and her relationship with her family, I love how you built her character and the flashbacks were really effective and a good touch. I enjoyed very aspect of the story and I am looking forward to read the rest of your work!

Dangerously Falling In Love With You

Wow! I do not know from where to begin. This story has been a wild ride and I must that that I am in love with her character. I love the way you have portrayed her emotions. Your words and way of style is absolutely phenomenal. You know your way with words and you make the reader feel a connection with the characters. I absolutely loved it and I can not wait to read more of your work!

Snap

I have not finished the book yet, but for the past couple of days I have been distracted by from my work and every few minutes I would pick my phone up and continue reading. Your book is absolutely phenomenal. The events, the descriptions, the freaking buildup, and god, the characters are amazing. I love how you send a message through your work, your characters, and you make it so effortlessly. You made us go on a wild ride with Jake’s betrayal and I can’t explain how much I have enjoyed this book up until now! I can’t wait to read the rest of it but I am sure that it will be breathtaking. I am so glad that I got the chance to read such an amazing piece from a talented author like you!

Harmony

This is the first time that I read a short story that is so well written and all the emotions conveyed in it. You have perfectly described the tension, set the tone, set the setting and build up to the events beautifully! It is such an amazing piece and I can not wait to read the rest of your work because it was absolutely phenomenal!

Sold to Billionnaire

The tile of the story gives the reader an idea of what the story might be about. But when I started reading, I knew that this book was very different and unique from the books that I have read that revolved around the same idea. The plot and the building up events are totally special and really exciting! I loved your book and I hope to read more of your work!

The Rise of a Luna

I honestly can say that this story is a job well done. I can not really describe it in words. The way you built up to the plot is absolutely amazing and I enjoyed every part of it. The chemistry and tension between the characters gave me a sense of excitement which left me speechless as I was reading! Amazing job!

House Of Fire

It was my first time reading a book that is so different from what I usually go for; however, I really enjoyed every aspect of it. The different elements all combined together to form this book were certainly laced together in an amazing plot. The buildup was great and the story was simply amazing. There were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes but all that can be fixed with some quick editing. You did a phenomenal job and I really do wish everyone reads it! Keep up the amazing work!

The Visitor

I have never read a book like this before and it was simply amazing. I can not stress enough about how incredible your narration is and your descriptions. They keep me on edge wanting to read more and find out what happens. You put your words in a beautiful manner and I loved it!

The Court Of Love

I was very excited to read this story and I must say that this has been absolutely captivating! I am really glad that I started your book. The description was very well written and thought through. It is what made me want to read the book in the first place! I love it and can’t wait to read more!!

The Questing Knave Affair

I must admit that this book was different that any thing that I have read before. I love your writing style, the vivid descriptions of their styles and their characters. Your words have their own way of capturing the reader’s attention and I have been captivated by it. The events are certainly guiding up to, what I am sure is, an amazing plot. I absolutely loved your chapters and would love to read more! I hope you update soon. And keep up the amazing work!

You Are The Reason

The first chapter kept me on edge wanting to read more. Your descriptions and words are amazing. I am glad that I stumbled upon this book. Can’t wait to read more of your work! Keep up the good job!

Stripped Roses

I love how the story addresses real life problems. You definitely have your way of stringing words together in the most beautiful way. I love the emotions you have put in this story and it was simply phenomenal. I hope I get to read more of your works!

Healing Charles

Every chapter introduces a new adventure and a new spark between the two of them and I guess that that’s what I love most about the story. I can definitely say that this has been one of the best progressing stories that I have seen on inkitt. I really hope you update soon and fill us in more!

Th Beauty That Tamed Me

I love the way you have started your book because it definitely caught my attention and kept me on edge wanting to know more. You certainly have your way with words and you perfectly string them in a way to pull the reader into the story. I absolutely loved it and the characters are phenomenal. I hope you keep the amazing work!

Broken Princess

I have not read many mafia stories, but I am glad that I got the chance to read yours. From the first few chapters, you have caught my attention to it and that’s just good the book is. I loved the development and the characters and I loved the new twists that are in the plot. I hope you update soon and fill us in more!

Rude Awakenings

Enemies to lovers excellence. I know that they’re not lovers yet but the undying attraction between the two of them is captivating. I must say that this is exactly what I love to read. Two completely different people attracted to each other and watch them slowly fall in love. I am sure that the rest of the book will be absolute excellence and I am just dying to read the next chapter so please update soon! Keep up the amazing job!

By His Side

I believe that this story has great potential from only the first few chapters. It is truly amazing. I would wish you would update soon so we know more. From only five chapters, you had me hooked on the story wanting to know more. I recommend everyone to read the story because it will definitely be worth their time. I hope you do well on your exams and update soon! Keep up the amazing work.

Shackles on My Heart

This story has been an emotional roller coaster and I don’t know from where to begin. You have captivated me and the characters are phenomenal. I love the idea of the multiple point of views; however, I do suggest that keep them in separate chapters. Other than that, I’m glad that there is more to come. Keep up the amazing job!

Her Hidden Beast

I have not read many supernatural novels, but this one has definitely caught my attention. I love the character buildup and the way you describe her and you show her off as a strong woman. The only thing that throws me off guard are the grammatical errors but that can be easily edited out. I love everything about this story and I hope you upload soon!

The After Effects

I have got to say that this is not usually the type of books I read, but I am glad that I had the honor to read your book. The plot is not like any other and I haven’t read anything like it before. I love the details you have included and I am very excited to read what will come next. I hope you upload soon! Keep up the amazing work.

Delicious Ambiguity

What I love most about this story is the words you used and how flowy the story was. You swiftly take me through the emotions and I love it so much. Your work is perfect and I hope to read more of your works.

Skipping Stones

I can’t really describe what I’m feeling right now, but it is somewhere between intrigued and very surprised. I have never read a story from a dog’s point of view and it kind of took me by surprise, but it kept me on edge wanting to read more. Your plot is perfect and I would love to read more of your work! Keep up the amazing work!

Heart of Dragon Queen

Everything about this story was downright interesting and very adventurous. This isn’t what I have expected at all. I have read many stories revolving around the same genre, but your book is fantastic, and it has combinations of everything that I had been looking for. Keep up the amazing work and I hope to read more of your works!

Alpha Kaeden

I love everything about this story. Your words suck me into the scene and your description of everything is on point. I like how flowy the story is. I can’t wait to read more of your story and keep up the amazing work.

The Assassin’s Guilt

I loved everything about this story. Your imagery is phenomenal, and I love that you go into details. I hope you’ll be uploading soon because I would want to find out more. Keep up the amazing work!

Love or Hate

The story has great potential and I can see it prosper in the near future. I really like Ellis’s personality and character. I suggest that you add some more elaborate details and try to link the events in another way that is more smooth and swift rather than writing ‘after I stepped out of the car’ then writing the dialogue then repeating it. It’s better if it’s all moving smoothly one detail after the other and the dialogue flowing softly. And it’s always better to describe something rather than stating it directly like Its a fact. I can’t wait to read more of your work and good luck!

Her Dying Fate

I must say that the way you described the scenes was amazing and keep up the amazing work. I recommend this book to everyone because it’s definitely work your time. Keep up the amazing work!

Embrace

I can say that this book is amazing. I really love how you take me from one day to the other and from days and hour they turn into months so effortlessly. Their chemistry is captivating and I am in love. You introduced him in the best way and unexpected way possible. Everything was so perfect. My only comment is that there are some grammatical mistakes, other than that, I highly recommend this book because it’s absolutely worth it.

Secret Blood

Can I just say ‘WOW’? The opening was absolutely perfect and I am sure that the book will continue this way. I can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters. The description captivated it and it reached my heart. I hope you upload soon! Keep up the phenomenal work.

Hey you! Love me?

The story has great potential and I really love the concept. Amy is so down to earth and Glade’s complicated character is very intriguing. The character’s development was well plotted and the chemistry between them is just perfect. The story overall is amazing and I would recommend this story, because it’s worth the time.

There are just a few grammatical mistakes that need to be fixed. And there are also some quotations missing that are misleading at times.

Keep up the amazing work! Can’t wait to read more chapters.

His pomegranate Queen

To be honest, Greek mythology was never interesting to me, maybe because I didn’t understand it or read about it enough. But I am glad that I decided to read the book, because now, I’m in love with it. The way you describe their appearances and their characteristics is just phenomenal. There are just a few grammatical mistakes, but they’re minor. I highly recommend this book, and I can’t wait to read more of your work.

Ocean Song Beneath The Waves

This book is all about the details and you’ve described everything about the setting in the most perfect manner. I really love how you describe the merfolk and the world undersea. It is all well written and I hope you keep up the amazing work.

Rose

I believe that the plot has great potential and the characters too. I just think that having a plastic surgery is a one hell of a jump. She could’ve just gone off the grid or gone somewhere quiet and secluded after of course changing her identity. You might also want to correct a few of the punctuation and capitalization mistakes. I think the story is off to a great start and I can’t wait to read more.

Just a Touch of Magic

I really liked the story, and all its characters. I like the character development of Bella and I love everything about her personality. The novel is very interesting and the author knew how to hold my attention. I suggest everyone reads this story because you will love it. Keep up the amazing work!

Come What May

I really love this story. I hope you upload the chapters soon. I couldn’t get enough of Luna and Alexander. You really know how to hook your readers to the story, and the suspense keeps us coming for more. Keep up the great work.

The possession of a flower

I really liked the story. All it’s aspects are relatable and real. I really loved that she’s plus sized which makes everything about the story real. I can’t wait to read more!

Accidental Passion

Usually, I don’t read these types of books because their plots were always the same. However, you have added your special touch to your book, and I am absolute hooked on the book. The buildup of the events, the character developments and your description and writing style were just phenomenal which made me continue reading and not leave it! I loved your work and can’t wait to read more of your work! Keep up the amazing job.

Diaries of a Beautiful Soul

I must say that your poems are absolutely captivating. Your words have a way of consuming the reader completely and I am left utterly speechless. I don’t read a lot of poems but I must admit that these poems are worth all the time it took to read them. I can’t wait to read more of your work. Keep up the phenomenal job!

Sorry for the late review, and I really hope you upload more soon!