Nour Elfaramawy

I could tell you that I aspire to become a NYT best-selling author one day, but wouldn’t that be such a cliché?Please, enjoy consuming my book and let it take you to a different time and place.

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What happens behind/within closed doors!

To be honest, the story is very sad and I’m not really a great fan of thriller stories. Though somehow, when I started reading the first chapter and I realized how traumatizing it would get, I still couldn’t stop reading. I wanted to know what will happen with Morgan. Your writing style is amazing, but it would be better if it weren’t all italics because I had a hard time adjusting to it. But amazing work!

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Very Good

I really like the first chapter and I believe that it’s well-written. I would suggest you shorten the paragraphs, but other than that great job!

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I’m amazed

I have reached chapter 6 and I must say that I’m in love with everything about this story. I know that there’s a lot more to come and I’m sure that it’ll be just as great. I like Claudio and I hope he’ll indulge more in Luna’s life!

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Nour ElFaramawy

I love every aspect of this story. The slow tension buildup keeps me on the edge every single time, wanting an update the next second. I'm in love with the characters and the way you shift from one POV to the other is effortless. Keep up the amazing work, and if there is anything I can do to help, you know where to find me. I hope there will be an update soon!

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The Accidental Princess

The story is off to a great start, and the description was very interesting and intriguing. There are just a few grammatical mistakes in the description that I suggest you fix them. I can’t wait to read more of your story and I hope you upload new chapters soon!

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Half A Soul

The story has an interesting turn of events and I’m sure what’s to come will be so much more intriguing. I know that Jessica will face troubles to get him back, and I can’t wait to find out how she will do it. Amazing work and I can’t wait for the next chapters!

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His pomegranate Queen

To be honest, Greek mythology was never interesting to me, maybe because I didn’t understand it or read about it enough. But I am glad that I decided to read the book, because now, I’m in love with it. The way you describe their appearances and their characteristics is just phenomenal. There are just a few grammatical mistakes, but they’re minor. I highly recommend this book, and I can’t wait to read more of your work.

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Shame

The story is great, and the plot is very interesting. I suggest you describe what Julia or John feel rather than just stating them as the facts they are. Other than that, great work and keep up the amazing work.

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Taste

The tension between the two characters is undeniable and it sure is thick between them. I feel like you’re losing some suspension by the rush of events. I suggest you slow down the events and add more emotions and more interactions between them. I love the story and I’m sure that the chapters that are to come will be amazing.

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Perfect Trouble

I believe that the story has potential if you changed a few things. In my opinion, the events are moving too fast, and most of the events are just stated blankly with no emotion behind them. Serena’s love toward Garret is a bit rushed, but I think I understand that since she knew him from before that she might have feelings buried inside, but still. I absolutely love his devotion and care for her and I loved watching it prosper. I think that once it’s fully edited it will be an amazing story.

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Ocean Song Beneath The Waves

This book is all about the details and you’ve described everything about the setting in the most perfect manner. I really love how you describe the merfolk and the world undersea. It is all well written and I hope you keep up the amazing work.

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Rose

I believe that the plot has great potential and the characters too. I just think that having a plastic surgery is a one hell of a jump. She could’ve just gone off the grid or gone somewhere quiet and secluded after of course changing her identity. You might also want to correct a few of the punctuation and capitalization mistakes. I think the story is off to a great start and I can’t wait to read more.

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Just a Touch of Magic

I really liked the story, and all its characters. I like the character development of Bella and I love everything about her personality. The novel is very interesting and the author knew how to hold my attention. I suggest everyone reads this story because you will love it. Keep up the amazing work!

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A Luna’s Dark Past

I really like the story so far. I have reached chapter 5 and I’m really loving it. The story is progressing very quickly but the events are really interesting and intriguing. I just suggest that you fix the quotation marks, but other than that keep up the amazing work!

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Staying With Her

The chemistry between Blackhawk and Clarissa is amazing. You surely know how to keep a reader interested and on edge throughout the story. The tension you have created between the characters is well built and is very addicting. I can’t wait for the coming chapters! Keep up the amazing work!

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Ethelwine: School of Magic

Magic and all that whatnot isn’t really my cup of tea, but I’m glad I started this story and continued reading it. Your writing skills and everything about this book is amazing. I suggest that everyone reads this story. It is very consuming. Keep up the amazing work!

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Come What May

I really love this story. I hope you upload the chapters soon. I couldn’t get enough of Luna and Alexander. You really know how to hook your readers to the story, and the suspense keeps us coming for more. Keep up the great work.

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Little Girl’s Wild Side

The story has great potential and I know that with some minor improvements, I believe that it’ll be great. I like the character development of both characters and their love story. I’m excited to read the rest of the story. Keep up the amazing work!

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The possession of a flower

I really liked the story. All it’s aspects are relatable and real. I really loved that she’s plus sized which makes everything about the story real. I can’t wait to read more!

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Nour

The story is off to a great start, and I am sure that I will stay tuned until you finish writing it. I just believe that the story might be somehow rushed. The events are falling in too quickly and it feels like some of the events are stated. Other than that, I really like the story!

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Nour ElFaramawy

I am a big fan of poetry, though I don’t read much of it. The way you portrayed scenes left me in a state of amazement. I had to keep a dictionary near by so that I can understand some of the vocabulary, but it didn’t make me love the book any less. I say keep up the amazing work and can’t wait to read more of your poems.

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