Sunny Randall's Twin
I've enjoyed reading of the adventures of Savannah Hartman. I feel Lisa has a unique, day-to-day grind into the life of a private eye. It's refreshing to have this perspective; and it is similar to the writing of Diane Kelly with her character Tara Holloway.
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The plot, pace and overall description; you get a genuine feel to Savannah's daily routine and some of the more humorous takes of her profession.
However, I would go back and look over the overall grammar and spelling in some of the spots in each chapter. In ch. 14, the third paragraph; the phrase, 'The file said Alena had moved to Hopeville six month ago..." I's add an 's' to month to indicate the plural time frame.
Overall, a delightful read; well done!