I fell in love easily with this story. In the beginning it reminded me of Studio Ghibli films where fantasy is mixed with some science, almost like steampunk but not.
I continued to enjoy the world culture of The Shattered Girl. I especially love the idea of dwarves being seafaring folk instead of confined to mountains. I'm going to miss this story.
The only thing that needs improvement is some of the grammar.
My only disappointment is that this story hasn't been finished and I'll never know how Emilia's story ends.