An Interesting Premise
As interesting as I find the plot of the story, the pacing is too fast. Even though an entire household was slaughtered I felt nothing for them though I 'knew' that I was supposed to. I know nothing more than the fact that our main character loves her parents and has a sort of 'spidey sense' but there was a lot of telling and not enough showing.
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Anna was by far the character I had the most attachment to and her death didn't faze me. Not one bit.
These first chapters felt more like a flashback or a prologue, maybe if we knew our main character more, they would have had more emotional impact, but as it stands, I feel that I would be able to start the story at chapter 5 and still enjoy it very much, the story of a young woman out for revenge, wishing death on the royal family and all that.
I can't wait to read the future chapters, for all I've said (it is a review after all) you have the uncanny ability to hold a reader's interest. So kudos to you, Author.
Keep on writing ♥