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Powerful

What makes this series of poems amazing is the raw emotions you put into it. You chose to use your personal experiences and converted them into a powerful message. One that we all either can relate to or can learn from. It’s a wonderful thing to do so keep up the good work!

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Brilliant concept

I loved the concept of this story. Writing from a cat’s perspective really grabbed my attention.

But I think the story could use some editing here and there. I think the story could be brought to a whole other level if you cut down on the details in some places such as the description of the attic. I didn’t find it necessary and it took a bit of the focus away from the underlying mystery and eerie undertone. I think it also would give more power to it.

Other than that a splendid story that just needs a little bit of tweaking!

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lovely story

I got to admit, I was a little skeptic starting this story. I'm usually not one to choose fantasy over other genres. But this story managed to changed my perspective. I enjoyed the writing style and loved the head hopping.

It allows the reader to see things from different perspectives and get to know the characters better. Just a little side note: when you change the point of view, I would suggest mentioning who's speaking before starting the chapter as it sometimes got a little bit confusing.

But other than that, a good read! Cant wait to read more!

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Brilliant story!

First of all, I loved how you touched on a subject that is overlooked quite often.
You see the world through the eyes of someone less fortunate instead of opting for a vanilla character.
It's a fresh breath of air from a different perspective.
The way you described certain things were spot on, like the way how those living on the street got treated.

Absolutely loved the plot, brilliant how you described the whole aftermath.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your short stories!

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