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Fascinating start

I have just begun reading your book, and I am captivated. I understand that I have just started- 3 chapters in- but I thought, you might want a review in the beginning stages of your book. And so, I shall tell you that your first chapter is a fascinating hook. You give enough information for the audience not to grow confused throughout the story. Truly, I must tell you, that your book contains beautiful vocabulary, unlike many other books I have read on websites. Please keep writing. You are doing an absolutely fantastic job.

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