Amazing story. The plot was amazing and I loved the twists. The only thing I would criticize is the grammar. Sometimes things would be spelled wrong, or the punctuation would be incorrect. Nothing too big and it was still easy to read. For instance, I remember in one of the chapters it said Chloe needs Chloe and that was very confusing but I still understood that it was just a mistake. The author is a great creative writer and it was a great story overall.
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Also, if you are having trouble with grammar I use Grammarly and I know that so cliche but it does work for spelling and you don't have to download it there are extensions for it as well and you can use a free version and it works just as well. Amazing story and I can definitely see this author going somewhere :)