Parebant

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Lol No

After seeing the genuine positive reviews for this story, I started to think, "maybe I'm just being a c_nt?" Then I remembered that no, this book was pretty awful.

The basic plot was terrible. The events were poorly written. Nothing made sense.

Instant romances will forever be the cringiest tropes in young adult fiction. If you're gonna write erotica, make it erotica. Don't hide it under the fake blanket of 'they're in love so it's ok', especially not when the love is there WITHIN A WEEK of the lady being kidnapped.

Next, she's a sex doll. She lets them kidnap and carry her around to their cabin, stays when they say some crazy sh*t about mates, and lets them fuck her into an oblivion of unprotected sexual fluids and spit.

She's not a likable character, and these are not likable concepts.

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I'm Utterly Speechlesd

I dont think I've ever read a story on a free site such as Inkitt or Wattpad as skilfully written as this. You've torn my heart out and replaced it with an ardent longing to read more and more.

Truly the best story I've read in a long long time.

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Yes yes yes yes yes I love it

Absolutely love this story.

It's got the romance, the suspense, the lust, and all of the characters showing vulnerability at some point. It's refreshing to witness an alpha who isn't a slab of muscle and dominance, who has a sob story but isn't a brick wall of feelings because of it.

Amazing work.

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Lovely little fantasy

I enjoyed reading this short story.
I love how the siren was portrayed as more than a pretty seductress. They're meant to be terrifying, and you got the balance of scary:sexy perfectly.

My only criticism would only be his accent, as it's quite distracting. But that's purely subjective.

Overall great story :D

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So cute!

Wonderful story! Great characters, good compatability, cute romance development. Definitely a good read, worth staying up until 1:30 AM for :D

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What a tease....

I am absolutely in love with this story so far.

The characters are active and have their own complex personalities, the plot is interesting, and ghetto sexual tension is palatable. Love it.

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The Best Erotica I Have Ever Read

I love love love love love this story.

You put in so much information and character depth that it's hard to believe this is only 11 chapters long. It's full of excitement, romance, suspense, and some hot f_cking sex. I love how Andrew actually thinks through his responses, and more often than not, is able to reign in his temper. Self-restraint and sensibility look so sexy on him - if you can make it through chapter 1 that is.

But what gets me the most is probably just the male POV, which allows readers to see the full range of emotion that a 'stoic', 'short-tempered' dominant would feel. Male authors get me off with this sh*t.

Thank you very much for making this wonderful work of art. My nights have been blessed <3

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Bang on the money - literally

This story is a real goodie for me in that it provides an adequate sex:plot ratio. The sex scenes make sense within the plot and the descriptions aren't too graphic nor too vague. They are also anatomically correct as far as I could tell, which on a platform like Inkitt, is more than I could have hoped for.

The plot itself isn't very complex, and the conflicts can be quite one-dimensional and cliche at times, but that's probably due to my own personal preference rather than the quality of the writing itself. Regardless, the humour and wittiness of the characters give even a simple filler chapter a unique spark.

All in all, I love it and I'm glad this author exists.

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