A life filled with depression is clearly depicted. good use of end rhyme.The author has used the a-a, b-b, end rhyme really well. And the thoughts of a person suffering from depression are presented in the poem.
Good diction . This is far beyond from a normal structure of a poem and that depicts the complexity of the life with depression.
Wow. Cheyenne Wright is a poetess too. Well done sister!!!!
I did English literature for my Ordinary Level examination. But now i have forgot a lot. But as a whole good poem. Reader can be a part of the grieve which suffered by the narrator. Although not everywhere, rhyme has been used where it should be used.
What should I say?
Poem is good. And I found out that you are suffering from a inner pain.
I wish that pain would end soon !!!
Keep writing dear sister !!
Happy Birthday dear sister !!!!!!!!!
May all your dreams come true !
Try to be better than you were yesterday !!
Good Luck!! Chey !
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