Pat Garrett

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Pat Garrett shot Billy the Kid, then was reborn as me. His third best accomplishment was writing the interactive gamebook 'The 8th Continent' with his brother. It's free to download on GooglePlay.

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Ghost in the Hallway

Loved it Dave. Good luck in the competition. The twist at the end was cool. If you're observing the principle of Chekhov's Gun, then there should be a reason why the ghost is wearing that hat... maybe you could link it somewhere to one of the kids or the character himself. (I'm knit picking so that this review is longer than 200 characters, as this site insists!).

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