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Simplicity

I love the simplicity of this collection. That's not to say it's without deep meaning.
I feel for this author, she can put emotions into words without over complicating things.
You can fall in love or lust with her characters.
If you've not already read this authors works please do as I'm sure you'll be pleasantly surprised that this collection is not a one off but a large mixed collection of works.

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Inside Her Head

This is a chance to look inside the authors head and heart.
I love how raw the words are,how the writer makes you wonder "would she really be like this". Is she telling us her experiences or her fantasies,you reader decide!
I've re-read all these for reasons known to the author, they now seem even more poignant, she will know why...................I'll miss being *inside her head*!

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Raw Emotions

This collection spills over into eroticism. Deana makes you feel it is her, she excites and leaves you gasping for breath with her raw emotions.
Is she a whore, a little girl or just a woman who has found her voice?
I found this collection sexually exciting and yet you want to shake her, the woman not the author.
More to follow I hope.

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The Hurt Shows Through

Personal experiences sometimes make for hard reading, but here Deana keeps her thoughts simple and to the point. You can share her pain without turning away.
I love her style and passion.

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Aspirations Will Flourish

Again Deana really plucks at those heart strings, every word hits home.
It may well not all be personal experience but that's how it comes across, you really feel for her.
I hope she always writes because I think as good as this collection of works is she will get better and better.

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A Budding Talant

I have been reading works by Deana for some time now, but this as a collection really works.
The transfer from thought to writing shows great emotion.
I think anyone reading this collection will be moved by the simple but powerful writing technique.
I will continue to follow this new young "future star" with anticipation.

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Cowboys And Cowgirls with a twist

As I started reading this I was reminded of Stephen King, his Dark Tower series. The style not the content but then you also get eroticism, It's not sex for sex sake, it's a strong part of the story.
I hope this author develops this style, I for one would pay to read a full length novel from her.
I look forward to reading more.

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