I will be honest with you. I spotted some of the major errors and I hope you can correct them as soon as possible. The writing style was a bit confusing and then the story is just going here and there.
Read the story now
Why are they suddenly hating their friend? It does not makes any sense. In Saee's case it's kinda understandable that her friend gave her number to a stranger but they had lunch with him so he was now not a stranger and if she doesn't want to talk to him then she should have made it clear in the first place.
In India, I guess no one will go out with stranger to have lunch and specially a foreigner. The girls are straight forward and up to the point until and unless they are some kind so bitch and want to play with feelings.
Back to the topic, the story needs some improvement and I hope you can also work on your punctuation and capitalising the words like the first letter of name should be in capital form. If you will fix those minor mistakes then it will easy to read.
Secondly, the conversation, it was not at all clear. As a part of audience it is a bit hard to know that who was speaking which line. Try to separate the dialogues.
Don't be discouraged and keep on writing!