Penny Jessup

New chapters of my YA mystery/drama 'Dark Valley High' are posted every Wednesday :) Love meeting new writers so please feel welcome to say hi! x

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Important subject

This is such an important issue to be writing about and I think you are doing a great job of it. It's a really sensitive and accurate approach. Thank you.
The writing itself could use a little bit more punctuation, just to break up some long sentences but the story and the concept are great.

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Great Concept

This books has such a strong concept. The premise is really clever and enticing. The main character is relatable and you really feel for her. You've given us a real sense of how much she cares for her brother.
I'm really excited to see where this goes. Everything really kicks into high gear as well when Dess starts to make deals with the supernatural.
I really enjoyed reading this so far and am excited for there to be more.
There's a little bit of gramma and language which could use a second look but it doesn't detract at all from the story.
Thanks for your wiring. :)

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