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A rare gem

Unique premise not beyond the realms of possibility. Engaging read. Excellent character development.
Chapters could be shortened, but the flow was very good!

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A compelling read so far!

A really interesting read so far. The characters are intriguing, rough around the edges and unique. The author is setting up the story and describing the world well. You can feel the grime of the place through the author's words and see the contrasts between the two worlds. The creatures are different to your average vampire story which makes it stand out. Can't wait to see where the story goes.
Punctuation is a little lacking, but doesn't really take away from the story. I think if anything it shows the author's passion to get their story out of their head and onto the page. Keep on going!

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