PerezK

Wannabe Author, teacher (for real) and overall eclectic soul. Loves to try new things. This is a new thing.

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Nice

Sometimes the writing moves smoothly and sometimes it is stilted. Perhaps a little editing for smooth dialog would help.

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Great story

I did not think I would like it as much as I am. Great story told by a great storyteller!

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Better and better

I would say too many swx scenes but you write them so well! Loving the story!

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Nice story

Love the story but the writing is a little stiff and does not feel natural.

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Wow!

What a great story! I grabbed this out of a whim and am sooo glad I did!

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So much going on!

What a great story! Some cleanup of the text would help.

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Great story

What a great story! What else can happen to this girl?

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Great start.

I cannot wait to see what happens to the jerk!

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What a great tale!

A great story. I will not put it down.

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Loving the story

Wasn't sure about the story but thought to give it a try. Now I hope it has an ending already!

A great story.

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So good

Loving the suspense! I think this is the great tale with a lot of intrigue.

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So good!

What a great story! I have to find the continuation!

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Excellent tale!

I am finding this story to keep my attention! Very well done. I cannot feel even a little sorry for the brother. Who does that to their blood?

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Just WOW

The author has caught my attention and makes me feel like I should keep reading.

There is something very compelling about an author who keeps the readership involved.

She is one to follow!

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