Phoebe

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Strong definition but wrong description of marcus at the last chapters.

I would say beautiful write up, words were used adequately. I dislike the mixed personality of good marcus to bad marcus without strong reasons, bad father to good father in just a chapter, he and others had received a lot of children for years, striping them of truth and good childhood, wrong ways of pleasure in marriage, etc.

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