Pjjordan

Jamaica

Stay close to anything that makes you glad that you're alive.

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Five Favour

Easy to read and understand, very attention-grabbing and detailed. The way the emotions are expressed would make one feel as if they were the ones experiencing it. Just a few grammatical errors but as you said this is your first book.
Keep up the good work and happy writing.

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Great book

A book I can definitely get around and read in my spear time (when I don't have school). I love your take and twist on wolves, so original and nothing I've read before. I love it.

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Spirit of fire

Beautifully detailed and written, the way you explained the first chapter made it seems like the scenes were going to life. Continue writing such a wonderful story.

P.S I was trying to reply to your comment on my post but ever since Inkitt crashed the other day things aren't the same....

But like I said keep up the good work and continue writing

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Amaris

Very good story, the story line, the characters, and the scene are all very well written and easy to read. Well done and keep writing.

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Lost for words

I am lost for words at how wonderfully written your story is. I love the description and details, I will definitely be looking out for future updates.

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On the outside

So far a great start to what will be a great book. I for one think it's very well written and I'm interested to see where you take your characters.

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Great book

Ok, so first of all I think I just fell in love with your book, the why how you described that mermaid dress had me picturing myself in it.
I can't wait for more, I would to know more about the arrogant billionaire.
Keep up the good work.

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A great book

I enjoyed reading, was just a bit confused in most part in what was being said.
But like I always say we are not professionals and we all have room for improvement even if we were. But so far great book, and keep it up, your writing can only get better.

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I love it

I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and will definitely finish this book, I love how strong Aveiry is (hope I got the name right) but either way, great book, great writing. It definitely gave me a very vivid picture in my mind about what was happening.

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So for so good.

Not much of a love and romance type of gal but I really enjoyed it. I wish you the best of luck with all your novels to come.

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Good book

So far a really great book, Venus is very relatable. And I do look forward to reading more about her. Keep up the good work and happy writing.

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