Preston Tucker

Writer and Reader

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

The exchange

Off to a great start. I would be interested to read a second chapter keep up the great work...

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Three Stories of Wartime

Gripping, provocative this thirsty story leaves you hot under the collar and wanting more. Not for tots! Beautifully written and a job well done.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Refreshing, engaging.

Wonderfully written, easy to read and a page turner for sure.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Annabelle

Punctuation isn't something that bothers me and I did not see many mistakes. I enjoy the dialogue of the story, I would have liked to have seen more unique names for the characters. Overall it is very interesting and easy to read.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

The almighty voyage

From reading four chapters I am able to surmise two things. This is a two dimensional story and this is an imaginary world with no limits. From the first chapter the royal knights charge a dragon. None of the knights have names. Just 1- whatever. In chapter 3 you name a bunch of soldiers for the next voyage, but I feel that is late. Your king would be better off having 2-3 trusted men with unique personalities from the offset. The council members also need names. It always seems like the weather is always bright and sunny. The part where the three ladies approach King Orion feels off. The women lose their husbands, but we're given the choice to be given their husbands corpse's in exchange for being combines, a king would not give them a choice he would just take them, one woman should escape to happen on King Orion, she should be ragged and tired, the point is I have to feel for their struggle. You have a solid plot and you have the terminology for this genre down. You have interesting action scenes maybe more world building. At the end of the day you got me to turn to the fifth chapter so you have a story that is desirable. That said you are only seven chapters in so I look forward to how you fill in the rest of this story. Good job and keep typing I would love to see this on a shelf one day.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Blank Canvas

This story is very interesting, it offers a rare insight to same sex couples and the challenges they face from both Western and Eastern cultures. The main character is gripping and at times you feel for her soul, The lead makes many destructive choices and it makes you imagine that she is a real person. From struggling with her mother's acceptance of her lifestyle, substance abuse or relationship issues, you get a feel for the difficulty that a gay person from another country goes through. Right now many of the Queries that I submit to publishers make me wish I had a story that reflects the challenges that a person in the LGBTQ Community face. Never has there been more of a publishers thirst to find other voices to push these issues to the forefront. If Inkitt does not publish this it will be a loss on their end. Good job!!!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Fantastic

You have done a great job. This story is entertaining and at time enchanting. You keep the read scrolling and guessing. I love you as a writer, you have a way of making the characters feel like real people and I always feel while reading that I am walking with them.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Good Poetry

Moving and masterful, very good job. If you have other poems you should try and submit them to some fellowship programs they offer grant money to poets so that they can write full time and publish their work. I am going to follow you and hopefully can see more of your work. Great job again.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

There where darkening begins

Very detailed work. You feel as if your walking every step with the main character Margaret. I love reading stories about daily life in England. I have English cousins so it is nice to know how English people interact with each other. author does a great time explaining hardships that are faced. I don't want to spoil anything but the one chapter that involved the dogs was very emotional yet written so powerfully.I love the long chapters and how i just seem to keep reading, Very good Job!!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Secret Blood is very interesting

Very strong opening, it sucks you in and you can't help but feel the pain the lead feels. Instantly you want her to be better, Hopefully someone handsome can come along to take her mind away from this pain. Good job.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Watch over my life is epic!!!

This is such a beautiful story, I am unable to put this story down. Please tell me you tried to bring this to market? If anyone loves romance this is for you!!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Age of Red

For your first completed story this is very good. I liked the way you developed both Vera and Liam. He was what you expect out of a werewolf rugged and shirtless, paired with a dragon it just made total sense. Very easy to read. Excited to see what else you can come out with. Good job.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Good start

You are off to a good start. I am definitely interested to get more detailed on her murdered father. I also found myself laughing remembering 19. The part about the teenager sneaking out to get gas station/ fast food was funny and so true. Would like to see more.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Dark, truthful and gripping

This has so much heart that it nearly broke mine. This is why writing is called an art form. Keep writing the ugly and the nasty of society you are very good at it

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Scorched

There are a lot of things in this story I like. I think it has a good tempo. I think the author is funny, I am interested to see what other works this author has.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

The Rebel Malfoy

Very interesting and creative. When you write an original piece you will have no trouble with developing a solid plot.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Being Mr. Billionaires Girl

Easy to read and understand. Good romantic interests and chemistry covered in a short amount of text. Was pleasantly surprised good job.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Forbidden daughter.

Author is funny,

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

I Have A Secret

I am a sucker for a love triangle. I always end up picking the girl everyone hates. I love the direction you have taken. Good Job! I can't wait to see more from this author!!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Undressed By The King

This is a very steamy Romance novel, gripping and sound plot. It is hard not to click on the next chapter.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

A Feast of Consequence

Very intense and gripping story. Easy to read. Yet the lookout point chapter still gives me chills

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Imprint Legacy

Perfect length for a story, organized plot. Many times with Science Fiction writers have a hard time explaining the science that is not the case here. Very easy to read. Job well done!!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Interesting, Refreshing.

Interesting relationship dynamic, It felt like a was back in highschool sitting in class. I think your off to a great start and would love to read more.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

The Fire Seal

I am only nine chapters in but I am hooked. Very detailed, Characters are unique and relatable, and not a rip off a some other stories character. Meaning the characters have real names. Very organized. Good Job will definitely keep reading.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Shame on you

This is the third story I have read in this universe. The characters powers are fully defined and I like the banter between the characters. I want more...

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Shame on Me

I like this one even more than the first. The characters flow very well and reflect an organized plot. I like the length of this one much more. I think you should keep the length of your stories under 30 chapters.
Good Job!

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Spell Me Once.

Very interesting, Great dialog good long read. If you like magic and vamps you have come to the right place!

Read the story now

Public Reading Lists

Followed Reading Lists

No badges received yet

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.