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Not following anyone yet

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Arcane

It sounds like NYC! I like the urban setting and it minds me of New Jack City. I think you are on the right path, This story would benefit from a sift through Grammarly. I even run personal notes through that software. Your writing succeeds in putting me in the story and software can quickly streamline your style.
You build tension well by following that man and there is good pace leading up to the final scene. Your ending scene is your most vivid.
Keep writing!

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