queen0fmistakes

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I want to read more!

I really got into it since the first chapter and I can tell already that it's not gonna be a cliche story. The build up is great but what I, as a reader, want to read is the point of view of each character in more depth; keep them in their character no matter the situation. I have no criticism other than what I said above. Please upload more because I'm eager to see where this is going!

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