Katsa

Sometimes I feel discriminated against, but it does not make me angry. It merely astonishes me. How can any deny themselves the pleasure of my company? It's beyond me. ~ Zora Neale Hurston

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Intriguing!

I love how historical points are used and slightly modified, it makes it possible to relate more to the story. I also like the writing style a great lo, it's floating, it feels as though the author had the story inside of him and couldn't wait to get it down on paper. The prologue was a little hard to get through tho. I feel like it could have been less data and a little more "Oh this is so interesting and I immediately get the plot and the feelings the author is trying to display". It isn't a big issue tho, I feel like this could go far.

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Reading and loving it

I really haven't read more than three chapters, but I already look forward to reading more! Sometimes the flow is flowing very slowly, but it isn't exactly a problem. The writing style was a lot different from what I've read before, but I think it fits these characters and world perfectly! I had to go back and read the descriptions of each person again because they were so many in the beginning, though that may just be me being slow. Great reading and I would really recommend it to anyone who wants an afternoon of fantasy!

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