M. Gracia

Fat Keily

There's no better feeling than seeing them, reading them to be together. I'm falling in live with the story and I'm glad I picked it. Thank you for the writing this nad posting it here. I recommend this story to everyone.

Lovely

It's a good novel.
I loved the parents' love story. There are quite some grammatical errors that I find here especially the full stops, missing quotation marks etc. There's not a good flow from one scene to the other but I believe it could be corrected. Overall, It's a good read 👍🏻

Shooting for Redemption

Wow wow wow. Even I was shocked at the ending. Loved it!!!! I never thought someone can make a read with only 600 or so words. Goodjob!

Amazing!

I'm all in for Fantasy, drama, action, Adventure. Easton, asked me about giving it a read telling that he is a amateur writer but all I can understand from this is that he is doing fantastic. The grammar is good, plot is good and every inch of this story is mind-blowing and I can feel the drama getting powerful :) Do give this story a read, I promise you won't regret it.

A five star worthy novel 👌🏻

Partners in arson

Just like last time, Teah has worked her magic here. The chapters are small and catchy. I. Just. Freaking. Love. It!

The archaeological chronicles

I love this story very much!! Never in my life did I thought that I would actually read sci-fi and be thrilled about it. I love how knowledgeable you are about archaeology and stuff and I love Egypt. I can tell that she's already liking him bits by bits and hope that within the next last 10 chapters the lead will fall for the Kaine (Even I can't pronounce his name, Lol) Believe it or not, if I ever got kidnapped by a handsome alien like him, there is a high possibility that I'll never return to earth 😅😉😏 I love how you made it appear that the aliens are the reason for the covid-19 pandemic and BLM and Australian wildfires etc. Personally, I recommend this story to everyone irrespective of the genre and consider your special because I don't read sci-fi but this story, somehow awed me. Five star worthy novel and I wish you all the best. Impatiently waiting for the next chapters.

With love, Mah'riy ah.
Lol, I tried to make up a name.

From here to love

Love this!!

I recommend this story to whoever looking for a good read. Five star!!

Blissful aftermath

Thank you for this masterpiece.

Alternative ending HM

I'm speechless. This is awesome. Everything about this novel is awesome.

Happily married

Oh damn! That was the ending? Mmm, I'm not surprised. You are talented and gives away a big cliffhanger. I loved this book very much. This is not the first book that I'm reading of Layla's. I've read Silence and His Stranger and gave an honest review about it too. I'll be a deleted user in it but I'm glad I read it. You are making me an addict to your works and you know what I am going to do? Will read the sequel. The aftermath, I guess is the name. God bless you.Will meet you again in the next book.

The Red Dragon

Amazing story. I recommend this novel to anyone. So so speechless.. I'm very glad that Ajith saved the other boys from different parts of the world. Some parts of the physical abuse was disturbing me, so I had to skip it. The villians have a story too, and I loved that parts.

Keep up the amazing work!!

Accidental Passion

Oooh I'm in love with Jack and Beckket. Enjoyed this story so far. Will be waiting for the update.

Testing

Story name: To What's Above & Beyond Us
Genre: Drama, Romance, Mystery
Written by: M. Gracia

This is a test review. Book is a Work-In-Progress.
Please consider leaving comments and reviews to help me reach to more audience.

Gracias.

Vampire's Pet

I liked it :D

Needs so much improvement

Has got a number of mistakes in them. Spelling, grammar, punctuation... Use grammarly to correct these and I don't think you've used the summary part right. You have to write the SUMMARY of the story in the summary section instead of write about YOU.

It's quite understood that it's your first time writing and you can write about it on your wall post instead. And writing multiple pov's is a bit confusing stuff especially for the readers (talking from experience) So try to reduce the number of pov's from different characters. Write one pov in one chapter instead of trying to fit multiple ones in ONE SINGLE chapter.

The plot of the story feels very shallow and dry. Instead of following the old style of writing a character description in the first page, try to make them readers find out on their own.
Try following "Show and Not Tell".

I hope you take this review in a positive light. I'm writing this because you've asked me to, in the post you posted on my wall. I wasn't up for doing any reading or reviewing but thought that maybe I could help someone improve.

I'm used to being very honest about my criticisms so hope you don't feel hurt over this review and make improvements. I can rewrite a review once you've FELT that you've improved.

Good luck.

My unwanted billionaire

Needs more improvement.

Eternity

Absolutely love it 💕💕💕

Three Kisses

I read it years ago. I still love it.

The girl who stutters and the boy who mutters

I wasn't impressed. But can't say it was boring.

Beta Stone

Stone is so cute. And his name is too ironic lol. Such a softie 🥺

THAT SIK LUV

Super Crazy... I mean reaaaaally crazy. Loved it.

A sliver of Infinite

I love you, Jescie Hall. Here take my money 💰 tell me where I can buy this art!

Kid

Amazing story. Absolutely loved it.

Bad girls

I cried. I laughed. I had adrenaline rush.

Great story.

The Blackmail Bride

My favourite book of all time. Periodt.

Fighting with a bear

Fantastically written! 😘😘😘

Stuck with a snow leopard

Aaaaah I love it!!!

The Canary Cowards

I love love love this book. You'll have no idea how crazy it drives you. The feelings of the characters are sooo vivid and that makes it feel like they are real. I mean, I wish they were...

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I broke into the Alpha's house

Werewolf stories are not my cup of tea but this is good. But I felt like everything was rushed.

DICE

Wow wow wow. I didn't see that coming but I kinda did. Knew that Deena was too much involved in everything and was clear to me because Pen was näive as duck and swallows her friend's words like she was the epitome of truth and wisdom. Poor Tom. And I was so hung up on the words, "She knew medicines." And the fact where she knew everything about the meds and maybe that Deena gave him the meds because apparently he didn't want kids and also Deena wanted to get him out of pen's life was just crazy because hell, her bestie is ducking in love with her. And then she blamed tok for being a monster but forgot that she became a bigger monster.
She should have thought about the fact that even if tom cheated, he wouldn't have left an evidence just like that. Because he is too damn clever for that and Pen is clearly that most dumbest and näive chatacter. Dang it.
Love this so much.

Alejandro

Amazing as always.

Grayson Smith

This was one of hell of a book. Never have I ever cried so ugly in my life. I was annoyed with what happened with my boy, Gray but glad that Blake got it worked because I loved him from the very start. Thanks for writing this.

Dude's A lady?

This book was such a mess bro. I was super annoyed inbetween but it was a fun read.

My name is not Cupcake

I have never read a werewolf book in my life and it's not my cup of tea but this was actually a good read.

Beautiful

Love this!

You are in hell boys

Superb! I loved it so much but it was too short

Welcome to hell boys

Haha it was so funny and great. Loved it!

The Lunacy of Tyler Lockhart

I loved it so much.

The Music We Make

A beautiful story.

Fuckboy

Loved it so much. I finished it within a day.

Even tho I feel like the ending was rushed.

Sunlight

I love everything about this novel. The character development, the description, the emotions and scenes and twists were soooo perfect. An amazing read, a thrilling ride.

Hilarious!

This was too hilarious that I actually forgot what I was doing, omg! 😂😂😂😂 I've never sent a book or got rejected by a publishing house but by a boy that I used to like. He straight up rejected me saying that I was the female version of Bucky Barnes aka the Winter Soldier. 🙈😂😂

I cried with laughter at almost everyone of the rejection letters that it made me think of writing one rejection letter for my story because I can think of many ways to roast my book and write something funny like this.
Made my day! 🤣

A guide on how to love Jules Everett

Love love love it soooo much. I'm so glad that everyone got their happily ever afters.

This is the second book I'm reading; of Aurora after pretty girls. Thanks for writing this. 💖💖

Pretty girls

The author really played with my heart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Loved it. Soooo sooooooooo much.

The Player and the Pauper

I laughed, I cried, I cooed.

BEST OF THE BEST.
LOVE YOU DEAR WRITER. I READ THIS STORY IN A FULL STRETCH. NOW, LET ME GO DO MY HOMEWORK.

Dollhouse

Made me cry two times, now I have runny nose. And my body hurts.

A great read. I feel bad for Tobiah and Amabel and John but still I'm glad that they get to be together again. Forever.

Bad Blood

I. AM. OBSESSED. with this story.

I've already read the other two works of Nour, my good friend, let me tell you, she is waaaayy too good with words and character development. She is freakingly talented and a pro at this game. Five words and The end and the beginning of everything (her stories) made me glued to the seat and read it in a full stretch because that is how amazing and spectacular her work is.

You have to read this! This is the best of the best works! If you aren't a fan of her works and haven't any of her works already, I feel bad for you.

I'll be utterly disappointed.

So please, honour yourself with this fantabulous work by one of my favourite author and my good friend. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Moonlit Songs

Yeeeeesss girl! I looove it sooooooo much. How can I put down the phone when the story is so engaging and interesting. My love, this is the best.

Anyone who doesn't like this story is blind ✋🏻😤
Publish this book and I'll definitely buy it. This is awesome. And I love Xander 😘😏 dang, he's- ooooh. I'm just so glad to have such a talented author as a friend 💖💖💖💖 I wish that I could give a million stars but here you go, full five stars :)

Soul-Mate

Overall, this is a pretty good read. I've read this author's other two books, Partners in Arson and Don't look down. And each of them are unique and interesting in their own ways too. An author with a type of writing style that does not confuse you or make you think twice about the plot. But there is not enough character development and mysteries left for the readers to lean into. And think about. The thing is, it was too predictable for a mystery thriller/ drama. But I'm not talking about it negatively, don't worry. The way the story moved was predictable, like what will happen next and who the sus dude was and etc. So, I wasn't exactly excited for it but was definitely intrigued the writing style. Quite Simple and beautiful as always. In the summary, it's said that she is determined not to let the killer get away but she doesn't really take any initiatives on starting a small investigation on her own but just gets on with her life. But of course, he finds her first and she falls for the trap and I think that doesn't make her any different from her friend. And I'm hoping there's something more in the next updates that will keep me glued. I'm not trying to discourage you or anything but I thought I should be honest. And I hope for an update soon. Good job so far 👍👌🏻

Innocence

The best one ever!!!!!!!

Tainted Love

I loved the story but was it supposed to end there?

Nice work!

L.O.V.E.L.Y

Somewhere Safe

Well written. Just so beautiful. The introduction, character development, plot, detailing is so good and feels like a pro to me. Fabulous description of the old time situation that people had to go through. So realistic that I could imagine every scene in my mind, like a movie.

Splendid work, Sofia.

The Bucket List

Quite an interesting read, and sorry that I took a lot of time in doing this review swap because I was dealing a lot of issues along with my studies. I hope you understand it. The storyline is very catchy, good plot and an interesting character development. Good work!

Dysmorphia

This is the best story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭😭🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺😭😭😭😭😭😭 Please publish the sequel in here.

The silent witness

Wow wow wow. What can I say? This is pure talent that I read. I couldn't take my eyes off of it because this is written with a lot of magic, dedication, talent. Every bit and corner of the story was perfect *chef's kiss 😚👌🏻✨✨

Fantastico!!

A Coven of Blood and Iron

I loved it loved it and loved it! Just like before, the author has done her magic with splendid distribution of words. I'm speechless!

When Edward asked Emily

At the first, I didn't understand anything, to be honest. And then, I remembered that it's a play😅 Look, instead using Emily. Emily. Emily. Everywhere, please write she/her. At times, the plot got very confusing but then I managed well. But I believe that writing play, is not your thing 'cause it doesn't fit right to your writing style. I checked out your other story 'His touch' and that seemed good enough. What I am saying that you should probably focus more on novellas rather than play. The grammar was okay. Plot was ok. And the overall is 👍🏻

Forget me not

Honestly, it was a pretty good read. I like how the author is very luxurious about the distribution of words in the story. Very strong vocabulary but I had to keep googling the meaning of the words. The plot is great, grammar, great. Storyline good. But maybe you should retouch the bookcover because people sometimes do judge a book by it's cover so, you might want to change a tad bit about it. Like, moving the name of the novel to middle and lessening the filter-ish look of the photo. I believe you understand what I mean. Splendid usage of words. But also, please do separate dialogues from the paragraph. In that way, it will be way easier for the readers. Overall, it's a 👍🏻

Mommy's Lil' Angel

Mind-blowing, fantastic..... I'm like a big fat horror fan and this is surely my thing. The grammar was fine, plot is good but you might need to cut the long paragraphs into less bigger because it's making it hard for me to read. The detailing of the story is cool and I loved that. The protagonist Chris is really struggling and this story is really a suspense-thriller. An dalal long chapters aren't my thing but I don't mind as long as the story is interesting. So that's that.

Well done👍🏻

The dark street

Outstanding brilliance, the plot is very good. The grammar didn't seem like a problem to me but the chapters were way too long but I adjusted well. Very good👍🏻 Keep up the good work.

Charlie Ever After

Loved it!!!!!

Enjoyable

The chapters were long and nice. Detailed and lovely. Very enjoyable read and I liked the story line. 👍 Keep up the good work.

Falling in love with my therapist

To be honest, I was surprised with how quickly this story got me hooked with just two chapters and that's a remarkable thing. The grammar was ok and if you'd just separate the big Paras into little less bigger that would be easier for readers to read. Interesting plot and the ending is highly predictable but that is never a problem.

Overall this is a good read 👍

Prohibited desires

Girl,you rocking!!!

The perks of being me

Loved it!!!!

Being different

Beautiful! I loved your writing style and plot, everything was very intriguing 🔥🔥 Five star for Sofia.

Released

Very very interesting and amazingly built story. Telling that it's a good read will be an understatement. I recommend this story to everyone!! Kudos to the author!!

The Hunter

Very interesting chapters and the protagonist Charlie is such a mood. Love her. However, there are several grammatical errors in here and I would suggest you to use some paragraph spacing and separate the dialogues from the big para. Other than that, everything is quite catchy. Well done👍

Forevermore

I loved it!!!!!! Really hooked me till the end!! I recommend this story to everyone!!!

Five star worthy ⭐

The Sapphire Queen.

Oh my god!! I loved it. Come on guys, I recommend this to everyone.

A love which was never meant to be

This story is soo sweet. I loved it, to be honest.

Creature Seers

Wow, just woooooow!!! I loved this story very much.

You're on a roll!! Five star worthy.

Dark tales

Omg, I loved it!!!!!! I'm happy that I chose this collection of tales.

5 star worthy....

Unpredictable: through the darkness

Finally, I've finished reading this story. What can I say? This is brilliant. At first I was struggling to keep up, then I was washed off my feet with excitement and got the best of me. I couldn't comment because I was busy reading 😂 Now that there's a new book, I'll be there.

Well done Allu, I'm proud of you.

This book deserves a five star. And I recommend this story to everyone ❤️

The end and beginning of everything

I love this story soooooo much nd now I can go peaceful study for my exam. I recommend this novel to everyone.

Five words

Jesus Christ!!! I'm speechless. You pulled so hard into this novel and I have no words to describe how grateful I am to myself and you that I decided to say yes and read it as you asked me to. You are one of the best writers I know as my friend. I can't help crying in my room, right after I came from my exam. And I'm logging back into Inkitt only for reading this novel and guess what? I'm reading the next book. Will somebody now wipe my fucking face? My eyeliner and mascara is all ruined. I really don't know how you made me cry. I just want to know this from his pov. The heart-wrenching pain that he felt while showing all the hard face and rude remarks. J freaking know that he loves her. And the next thing is that, I am so mesmerized by how knowledgeable you are about writers and books and novels and poems and Greek mythology. This is fantastic man. The way you describe everything, really lulled into this. And there is no stopping me now. Dear people, make use of your time and read this novel. Nour, will technically blow your mind.

Good work!

I liked it. Very small and understandable chapters.

Good read

This is an interesting story but there are a lot of mistakes and I'm sure that you'll correct them soon. Maybe you should add something in here, like, put their name before their dialogue because this is a dialogue-chat story as you said and it's confusing at times like, who is talking and when.

Eg: Nick: Hi!
Sydney: Wassup?

If you correct it this way, it will be easier to read and understand. So far, not so bad. And calling each other some animal names cracked me up 😂 Good luck 👍 Keep up the good work.

The girl and the boy who broke her.

Goddamn it, I'm in love with this story. Five star worthy novel.💫💫❤️