Rabiduslex

In a nutshell I am a wannabe amateur writer hoping one day I get to entertain millions of people like the great names before.

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Nice Read

It was a nice read. Interesting to see how the two sets of siblings interact.

There was a few spelling mistakes, but that was nothing major, A few always escape a read or two..

Also, the head hoping can get distracting if not careful.

The Melody and Emma was interesting to read, and you could imagine them as you read, which is always a good thing. They were also well developed that you didn't doubt their actions as being anything as in character.

Overall, the story shows a lot of potential in the author!

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