RachelLyons50

Gene *& Kittie

This was a short and sweet romance that sucked me in. I loved how this author described the scenery, and I felt like I could see the setting. I also love the emotions this author pulled out of me for such a short read. I really enjoyed this and wished it was longer, lol. Great job!

Lara

I don't normally read about vampires, but this book and world sucked me in! I admit it took me a few chapters to get into the story, and the violence initially was jarring, but I think it's because this is a new genre for me. The story flowed well, and the world this author created was very vivid and written perfectly. I can't wait to read more about Lara and Gabriel.

Mom & Mobile

Cute, short story with a good lesson for young people.

Him

This writer wrote very few words, but they were sweet and adorable.

Short story

I loved this sweet short story. Jeh was swoon-worthy with his love for Tia. I appreciated that they took the time to communicate and solve the misunderstanding that Moon created. So lovely :)

Once Bytten

Wow, what a story. I was completely engaged with the story, and Ella, James, and their group of friends. It had great suspense, and the romance was slow-building and good. I have two suggestions. The first one is I could tell the writer isn't from the US, but the story takes place in the US. Certain words, mum, crisps, arse, and a few other need to be tweaked for readers to know the character are American. Secondly, I wanted Christian to get caught for arms dealing. I wanted him to pay, lol. The writer did a great job of making the reader feel hatred towards Christian. He was an ass, and I hope there is more where he gets what he deserves. Great job and wonderful story.

Bad Blood

I really enjoyed this. I'm a sucker for a strong heroine and look forward to reading what come next. I thought the writing was strong and I connected with all of the characters.

Coral

I enjoyed the world created, and I think this author has a lot of promise. I look forward to more. I think once this gets edited and the grammar errors are corrected it will be even more enjoyable then what it already is. I can't wait to read more.